AnonymousUnsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 24/10/08
Adorable. So very in-character and the play up of Hermione's love of reading is really cute. Love the line "You will marry me and spoil me and my children—excuse me—our children with stacks and stacks of books." XD So cute. Love this fic. |
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Ooh! So cute! I, too, am guilty of using the word 'suppose' far more often than necessary.
Very, very nicely written. Just a question, though: How old are Harry and Hermione in this story? Because I can't really tell if Harry's defeated Voldemort or not. (I'm pretty sure that he has, but I'd like to know for sure, if you wouldn't mind telling me.)
Keep up your amazing work!
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Author Feedback: Wow, thanks for reviewing!  I'm not sure about their ages but I'd say 19 or twenty. They found all of the Horcruxes but have not fought against Voldemort yet. Yeah, I wasn't very descriptive about their age; I was just trying to capture the fluff, their behaviors and of course, the supposements
Till next time,
Viopathartic |
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Hana-xoxoSigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 27/07/08
Haha! That was so adorable and totally cute! 'He was sweet most of the time, but honestly, she needed quality time with her books.' That cracked me up so bad and this line : "You will marry me and spoil me and my children—excuse me—our children with stacks and stacks of books," amazing! Absolutely classic Hermione. Loved it!
xoxo
Hana |
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apaidanSigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 27/07/08
A good look at these two. an interesting scene between them during one of those quiet moments that every couple has. Well written. |
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AnonymousUnsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 26/07/08
I just had to come out of my self-imposed lurkerhood to say I love this story for one small, silly reason that probably only makes sense to me. I freaking LOVE the word \"defenestrate\". LOL! I never miss a chance to use it. Of course I don\'t get too many.
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HPismyLifeUnsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 25/07/08
squeee!!
Vio, that was e-mazing. Now I'm gonna suppose all the time  I suppose this is my favorite story now...
Liz |
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AnonymousUnsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 25/07/08
yay! I loved it  the thing with the word defenestrate was funny; i just learned a new vocab world lol |
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I suppose I simply have to review--supposing that you don't know how simply brilliant this series of suppositions was.
Ohay done now. But brilliant it was! It was cute and straightforward and ....*squeal* worthy. XD
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Harry85Signed | Chapter : 1 | Date : 25/07/08
It was short but nice and fluffy, just how I like them  Great job, really |
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spoiling with stacks and stacks of books, i really like that
this was extremely cute, good job |
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yeah why didn't you use supposition? or did you want to use supposement so that it'd fit with the tone of the story??? not serious, relaxing...idk but i liked it. i loved the simple movements of Harry like him kissing her hand and him twiddling his thumbs lol
nice one |
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KatherineUnsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 25/07/08
That was absolutely adorable! I loved it. I think my favorite part was the line 'hey, I kind of want to kill some people.' That cracked me up! Good job! :-) |
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I supppose I could say that this was really sweet, and I suppose I can tell you that I loved it...
Congratuations. |
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Hermy10Signed | Chapter : 1 | Date : 25/07/08
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