Such a well-written chapter. I can really see the anguish on both their parts through your descriptions. Interesting that Harry isn't attached to anyone else (but I guess he takes his role as "moderator" between Hermione & Ron seriously, right?). I wonder, do we get to see Ron at all? Not that I miss him.. much..

I liked how Harry and Luna seemed to be having two conversations in parallel, but still seemed to be on the same wavelength somehow. I'm curious how the trouble develops between Ron & Hermione (or maybe you described some of it from her perspective?). Anyways, moving on to the next chapter!

I just found this story and really enjoy this first chapter. I'll keep reading! I guess you do make clear later, but is it true in your story that Ron and Hermione are still dating, but not married? It seems like that is the case. Great story so far!

Ah, well, I'm still enjoying it, yes, but I'll enjoy it even more if you update soon! For a moment I thought he was going to kiss her...

I've read all 5 cbapters. It's so, so great to see another story from HIS POV and HE was in love with HER first, not the other way around which, in my opinion, so plentiful.
Keep updating, I'll keep R and R.

^_^

I love this story! I've been waiting for an update for so long. I just want them to kiss so bad!!

Gah! Your an amazing writer, what can I say? I will admit, this blows me away. I cannot wait for the next chapter!

Awesome!!!!

more more More More MOre MOre MORe MORe MORE MORE MORE!!!!!!!!!

I'm still enjoying it!!!I can't wait for the next chapter to be posted. They did have a moment and she sits in his lap, gazes into her eyes and Ron's been with Luna. Cool working out good why is Hermione fighting it she's killing Harry inside he wants her. Please write next chapter soon

wow girl, i had forgot about this story, where have you been? i think the story is still very nice, i hope to see more of it please keep up and update soon


Christina

Aww! So close! So Close! Poor Harry, I hope things are better for him in the next chapter. Great work by the way. Can't wait for more!

This is terrific, but it seems like the story sat still for quite a while.

Looking forward to future chapters...

I love this fic!
You're a very goode writer!
I hope you update soon!
bubye

Please update! This story is so wonderful and beautiful, I love it.
You must continue it. Please, for the sake of your readers, don't leave it abandonded

i have just read all four chapters in one sitting and they are amazing, the way you kept the people in the characteristics JKR set, i dont think any over writer has done it so well.

i have just read all four chapters in one sitting and they are amazing, the way you kept the people in the characteristics JKR set, i dont think any over writer has done it so well.