I like your third person narrative approach, it makes this story unique.
And a nice love-making scene btw, though i like smut very much, but a gentler version every now and then wouldn't hurt  |
Author Feedback: Never tried the third person narrative before, so I was very pleased with how it came out. And the gentler version of their lovemaking seemed to fit this story better. Thanks so much for the lovely review! |
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i love this one shot.
absolutely adore it. it's fantastic. your attention to detail alone makes this fic one of my favorites.
amazing. keep it up (: |
Author Feedback: Thanks! I love reviews that make me smile. By the way, I'm also a fan of your work. Thanks for the review once more and I'm glad you liked it. |
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apaidanSigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 24/07/08
I'm not familiar with the song, but the story is very good. the mood is fine, and it moves long very nicely. you do an excellent job capturing their relationship, even when both of them are denying it. Well written and I'm definitely going to check out some of your other works on this site |
Author Feedback: I'm happy you liked the story. Thanks so much for the review. |
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That was super cute. I love how even in the moment, Harry still is a gentleman to Hermione. Anyways great job on the one-shot.  |
Author Feedback: Thanks so much for noticing that! Glad you liked it. |
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gingercatSigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 17/07/08
I love the grown up and happy with Luna RON....he is a best friend.
Surprise, Harry spoke his mind and didn't worry about that darn friendship!! Good for him. REALLY Good for HIM!
Nice Story! |
Author Feedback: Oh, you noticed Ron's grown up, did you! Glad you enjoyed this. I really loved writing it. |
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IxiusSigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 17/07/08
i really enjoyed this story. it is nice to see a story show the inner fight in Harry about his love for Hermione.
Very good story.
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IxiusSigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 17/07/08
i really enjoyed this story. it is nice to see a story show the inner fight in Harry about his love for Hermione.
Very good story.
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Author Feedback: Thanks so much for the review! |
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Well, this was very good... though there is something that has been bugging me all along... It seems kind of fast that Harry and Hermione get together -not that I am complaining- but it is out of character, for Hermione more than for Harry, to jump into another relationship -physically- after breaking up with another guy...
However it was really good, as I said before. Congratulations for this shot, and I hope to read more from you soon!
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Author Feedback: I appreciate your input and the review. Glad you enjoyed it still. |
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Harry85Signed | Chapter : 1 | Date : 17/07/08
It was a nice piece, although I usually don't like songfics much. Good job! |
Author Feedback: Well, I'm glad you enjoyed it even though it's not your usual type. I appreciate the review. |
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usha88Signed | Chapter : 1 | Date : 17/07/08
Well I thought that was interesting. I really liked it. Very cool with how you didn't have so much dialogue in it. I thought there wasn't much dialogue in there. Very lovely. I wish I could give you some constructive criticism, but I can't think of any.  |
Author Feedback: The review is enough, so thank you for taking the time to leave one. It's appreciated. |
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I loved it even without a lot of dialogue you allowed them to tell the story with their eyes and their hearts and their actions it was beautiful! Now I think I should go peruse some of your other stories and find some new favorites |
Author Feedback: I'm glad you liked it and caught on to that. Words are not always necessary. Thanks for reading my other work as well. |
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Was this a one-shot then? In any case, it was wonderful to read! I love anything Harmony, but this one made a good use of the song! It was a seduction for sure - and very artfully done without being too explicit! Awesome job!! |
Author Feedback: Yes, this is a one-shot. Thanks for the kind review. I really appreciate it! |
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