Hi! Im sad that this story has come to an end, but I am pleased with how you ended it. I think I might try and read some more of your stories.  |
Author Feedback: Hey! I didn't say that it's going to be the last smutfic I'll ever write. Problem is, smut doesn't really have a plot, and making the story long tends to turn it repetitive and boring...which is what I want to avoid.
But sure, go through my other stories...Full Circle update coming up... |
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I very much enjoyed reading this story. Though Hermione thinks some of the oddest things while Harry is doing things to her, lol/ |
Author Feedback: Thanks.  And I really enjoyed writing it.
See, I can't pretend to be an expert on women, but I do know that a woman's mind is...well, complete confusion, and they tend to think of random things like that...hope I captured the effect. |
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Author Feedback: I don't know why, but I really like your reviews. 
The most powerful feelings can be produced by the slightest of touches...after the heavy artillery, a quiet ending somehow seemed to fit the mood...
I'm immensely happy that you liked the story...I've got a new one up, a oneshot, as of today, and when I return from holidays, it's back to the final stretch of Full circle... |
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Ahhh!!! What a great way to end the story!!! I hope you start/continue on the rest of you stories!!! I really, really like them all!!! |
Author Feedback: Great? I agree.
If you're referring to Full Circle, I will continue that story when I get back...this challenge came up, so I had to pause it for a while...
Thank you for reviewing. |
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Author Feedback: They do have hope for the future.
I'm happy you enjoyed the story. thanks for reviewing! |
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Author Feedback: OOC, definitely! Smutfics don't follow canon characters. To make it good, you have to make them your own. |
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wow i did not know ow does work or that people really use them. LOL! 
wow i can not believe that she yelled that out wonder what is next. |
Author Feedback: Well, you learn something new every day. 
And yes, I do tend to write unbelievably good stories. |
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ReginaUnsigned | Chapter : 3 | Date : 14/08/08
That was amazing! I've read hundreds of fan fics, but this is the best written Harry and Hermione, or any fan fic for that matter ever! That was beautiful, passionate and sexy at the same time!
That was the best I've ever read! You are a beautiful and incredible writer. I am in love with you and this story now!
That was incredible. Its indescribable, its so beautiful I can't believe it!  |
Author Feedback: The best written? Really, you flatter me...
However, I could point at least 5 authors in the HP fandom that are light years better than I am.
My aim is intense writing...I'm very happy you enjoyed it.
Thanks for reviewing! |
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AnonymousUnsigned | Chapter : 4 | Date : 14/08/08
this is so much FUN! LET THEM HAVE CAKE AND EAT IT TO!, FANTASTIC!, I like this very attentive harry, and this new unhibited Hermione. Can't wait till tomorrow, hopefully? |
Author Feedback: I'm hoping to update today, if not by midday tomorrow...
I'm glad you liked it. And I do agree, cake is nice... |
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Hi! OMG I am a perv. Because that was sooooo HOT! I think the ice cub was the best part. Like fire and ice it can be incredibly sexy. Until the last chapter of smutty goodness, byes |
Author Feedback: A perv? Welcome to my world...
Agreed, it is hot...I was sweating buckets writing this. 
And yes, ice can be sexy...that idea really took hold of me for some reason...
Next chapter is in the works. Thanks for reviewing. |
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leO.TSigned | Chapter : 3 | Date : 14/08/08
awesome awesome awesome awesome awesome awesome awesome awesome awesome awesome awesome awesome awesome awesome i love it lol haah looking for wards to the next chapter |
Author Feedback: Excited, I see.
Final chapter is in the works...stay tuned. |
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Soooo good!!! I can't wait until the final chapter! Please don't wait/take as long to update next time. I don't think I could handle it! UPDATE SOON!!! |
Author Feedback: Glad you like it, thanks!
Working on the next update as we speak...it won't be as long, so I don't expect it will take forever to upload. |
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Author Feedback: What do ya know...it is the first review!
The next part of the story shall be the epilogue...I don't have any sort of a plot, so I can't make it much longer...
Hot chocolate? I couldn't get ice cream out of my head when I was writing this...but hey, if it's hot chocolate that gets you, go for it...and with enough creativity, you could execute the scenario in real life...
Thanks for reviewing!  |
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CandraSigned | Chapter : 3 | Date : 29/07/08
That was really hot! And romantic. I loved it. Harry was a lot more confident than I would have imagined though. |
Author Feedback: Hey! Sorry for the late reply...I wasn't able to log in PK for a while...
Inevitably, smutfics eschew the characters to a point, where they are a far cry from their canon-selves.
I'm glad you like the story. Hoping to post chapter 4 tonight! |
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Hi! OMG that was HOT!!!! The charmed tub sounds just wonderful. What a wouldn't give to have a wand. This may sound crude but did Harry cum? I mean "finish" lol I was confused about that Until a new chapter then, byes |
Author Feedback: Oh, I know I'd love to have a jacuzzi like that too...
I have to write another chapter that will be of similar length and style as this one...and to avoid making it too repetitive, I had to omit some things now, so as to include them after...but no worries, I do have a surprise planned as well... |
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