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This is a great one-shot, really well written. Do you have any plans for a sequel - the wedding night maybe? |
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PhaeSigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 19/07/08
Wow! What a birthday to remember! A nice soak, a fancy dinner, and a fabuluous, erm, "desert".
I'm sure that Hermione could have done without the bad day, but it sure did end well! |
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A beautiful way to celebrate an engagement, indeed.
Sweet little piece! I expect to read more from you soon!
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IxiusSigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 16/07/08
this was a very good story. I like how you are able to capture there emotions and feelings for each other. I am a big fan of Harry and Hermione and it is nice to read a story about there love. |
Author Feedback: I'm glad you liked it  |
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lucke13Signed | Chapter : 1 | Date : 16/07/08
Very cute. Glad to see that she got a great birthday in the end. |
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AnonymousUnsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 15/07/08
perhaps i'm losing my touch, but i find it difficult to find any serious flaw in this piece. As such, i'll have to berate you for making it far too short 
I'm a fan of your writing. Keep it up.
And i've just realized how much that means coming from an anonymous reviewer.... |
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hermioneUnsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 15/07/08
wht a coincidence!i was having a darn tiring day till now!and became so much better after popping into-portkey and finding..ahh the hhr fics..r updated!and started to read yours... nice job..and really brightened my day..u'fortunately my b'day aint today.  if not i may get wht mione got! i gotta wait till next mth! keep it up. |
Author Feedback: Thanks, i'm glad it somewhat brightened your day!  |
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usha88Signed | Chapter : 1 | Date : 15/07/08
That was really cute. Very nice day. Sorry to hear that the fest didn't work, though I'm glad that you posted it here. |
Author Feedback: Well, if it did work I wouldn't have been able to post this here before September 19th
I'm glad you liked it |
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This is really remantic. Not to say anything bad, but is this just one chapter or is there going to more. I couldn't tell, it felt finished, but I wouldn't mind to see more.
That is all Thank for a remantic chapter/story |
Author Feedback: It is finished. I'm glad you liked it |
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hpfan2009Signed | Chapter : 1 | Date : 15/07/08
Great start to the story. Can't wait to read more soon.
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Author Feedback: Ah, sorry but this is finished. I'm glad you liked it though |
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Cute, very cute. I like fics that start out with a bad day, but end as the best, ha. Anyway it was nice.  |
Author Feedback: I'm glad you liked it, |
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Author Feedback: Well, I wish for you to have a surprise like this one I'm glad you liked it! |
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Orli_LuvaSigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 14/07/08
Awww that was a cute one shot...
What a great birthday she had in the end... 
btw your disclaimer made me laugh...
Love Jo x x |
Author Feedback: I'm glad you liked it, Jo
As for the disclaimer, I always try to write disclaimers that are a small jab at JK and her silly romantic choices in the series  |
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Wow a masterpaest.
I love one short story's.
and this was the best one yet!
Harry and Hermione all makes me smile
thanks for this wonderful and excellent story.
I hope to read anther story soon.
but till then so long.
tha tha tha tha tha tha tha that's all folks!
Looney Warner Mouse" Good after Noon and Good night and Good luck!"
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Author Feedback: I'm glad you liked it |
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gravacorSigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 14/07/08
Another great addition to your works. What a birthday and to think she was pouting. |
Author Feedback: Thanks, I'm glad you like it! |
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