Mmmmm, LOVING it so far. Great job mate.

Sorry, I'm not in the mind to write a full review right now.

Hey this was a great chapter really it wasn't bad at all to tell you the truth. It was decent as you put it and I didn't have to hear about all of Harry's crying and whining starting to be irritating seriously, but I loved this this chapter so thanbk you writers block. Why can't we just stau on this track or course with the two lovebirds. Doing good, keep writing, I hope you have a good weekend. Happy writing to you

Well it's not bad, just a tad short I think, but nothing too wrong about it

I wonder what drama you have in store for us Anyway this was good enough considering it was a bit of a filler

Good chapter, there's progress on all fronts I would say

Great chapter!

I like the way Harry & Hermione relationship is going.. nice to see that they seem to really like kissing ALOT!! AND THEN SOME..

THIS CALLUM SEEMS TO BE VERY INTERESTING???

I would like to ask if possible, that Harry & Hermione have a intimate chapter written about them!

I think that we will see more of Callum along the way. In a bar getting piss poor drunk is an odd place to find a "close friend".
I can see what Harry would like. Callum knows who he is, doesn't care, has no expectation of "Harry Potter" and treats him like one of they guys. In a way, he has some of the qualities that make Hermione who she is.
I thought Harry was getting closer to forgiving himself. I think it is time he accepts that. I would like for Harry to realize that he can have that comfort with Hermione, that he has with Callum. I understand that sometimes you can't talk about things with a girl (love interest) that you can with one of your buds. What I didn't like was the word comfortable. He should never not be comfortable around Hermione. She truly doesn't judge, nor does she demand any less than she gives. I think this is the big thing Harry needs to realize and accept, and then forgive and move on.
Hermione is nosy, but, it's part of the love that Harry has for her. It IS part of who she is and isn't a bad thing. I loved the ending with the freckle...

I really love this story, please update sooner, i can't wait that long again

You were right this was kind of dry, dull, and fillers really. But yeah I hope to get into the action part to and how long will they play cat and mouse with each...Happy writing and I hope you have a good week.

As usual very nicely done. I like the changes you made as they helped the piece flow much better... yay me, I was useful.

I especially loved the conversation between Sam and Harry... very funny stuff... whoring imbecile... going to use that one on someone. Anyways lovely job. Looking forward to the next chapter.

P.S. Sorry for the late review but life has to be lived sometimes so I've been getting on with that a bit.

Authors: Alexander Pope, Robert Browning, and Lewis Carroll

Strange start, but interesting nonetheless. I'm moving on to next chappie.

Cheers!

Rosali

Strange start, but interesting noneteless. I'm moving on to next chappie.

Cheers!

Rosali

Loving this story. I like the Bones theme to the story. Can't wait for the next chapter.

You maye have lost alonso, bu you gained aqullani! I worthy trade in my opinion he is a fantastic player! Nice chapter too btw

Hey!

Don't worry, it was a filler, yes, but an ok one

Still one of the angsty fics I am totally hooked on. I love Harry's conversations with the doctor. You kind of made my morning, so thanks! lol

Can't wait for that date of them..

PS: Aw...I'm so sorry about Xabi, dear... I mean, I'm a Real supporter, so in truth I'm kind of happy he's come. But I have a soft spot for Liverpool (cousin living there, Torres Reina and Riera there, Beatles having born there...).

Hugs!