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Haha, good story, I love the way you ended it, because not everyone gets what they want in the end. It suited the story perfectly. I will definately be reading more from this author-i hope you keep on writing. Ron and Luna are so cute together and i think there need to be more stories about them and longer ones at that! Thanks for the good read-story of the day for me! |
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This is wonderfully written, and guess what? The first Ron/Luna fic I have ever read! I like it very much, and am glad I found this. I love Luna to death, and I really think she and Ron should get together. I might even start liking them almost as much as I like H/Hr! Thanks for sharing this story!
~dani |
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AnonymousUnsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 25/02/04
i thought that was really cute |
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AnonymousUnsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 19/02/04
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AnonymousUnsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 20/01/04
nice!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! |
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michouSigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 22/10/03
i really wish there was a sequel to this. But after checking i see there isn't, anyway its cute how they kinda play off each other and such. Good story. |
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Good story.  *sigh* But Ron is so dense isn't he? Oh well. I'm sure he'll figure it out soon. Hope you write more. |
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This is an amazing insight into Luna's character! Brilliant. Please write more R/Lu. You've got their characters exactly right.
~Silvestria~ |
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MuirninSigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 02/09/03
Oh cool start to a great story...
Get Ron to snap out of it.. and find he is in love with Luna... please...
They have become my 2nd favorite couple... with Harry and Hermione being first...
Please write soon...
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´¨`•.* Muirnin *.•´¨`
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we've found a place that is so deep in the psyche that you will never return |
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AnonymousUnsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 17/08/03
bgjkjk |
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AnonymousUnsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 17/08/03
nice |
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 very good story! very comical to  i hope you dont leave it that way. b/c i'm just going to be up all night wondering whats going to happen.  over all good story! |
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noddwydUnsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 07/08/03
yes! That's exactly how I see Luna's mind working. I am also very similar to her in that respect, which is why I love her character so much. Great fic. |
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I like it. I really, really like it. Explicitly wonderful I might add. So it's a one shot? I don't mind at all.  |
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I'm afraid that, although you had a wonderful plot, you had quite a few grammatical errors as well as some spelling errors. I think you did an exellent job going into Luna's personality, but the story was hard to understand because of your spelling. Also, I beleive that you need to learn how to use a thesaurus, because you had almost no diversity in the words you used, sometimes using the same word twice or three times in the same sentence, when it was hardky necessary to use it once. I hope that you are able to fix these problems, because you are a good writer, you just have to proofread your story. |
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