Oh this is going to be an awsome story//I'll add it to my story alerts.

Howdy!

I'm glad to see you writing again, although I would rather see your take on a new story than a redo of this one...

I'll reiterate what I said in a previous review. Please don't take down the original, it's one of my all-time favorites. Another author did that and although her re-write may have been technically better, it didn't have the charm of the original.

Glad to see you back!
-Korval

i love the rewrite keep um comin its good to have u back

Just wanted to tell you that I've started reading the original story but somehow haven't finished it. But today I've decided to read the redoux version and I was so hooked on it that I've read all that followed in the original story.

I can see why you are rewriting parts of it - the earlier chapters needs it in some places (but I still find this an exceptionally good story - I wouldn't be able to finish a badly written one )

Anyway there is one tiny complain about one thing in the original version I'd like to make - Hermione's dismissive nature about Muggle world/scinece/knowledgde is totaly unrealistic to her character. Firstly with the painting of the apartment by hand (did she really not paint by hand?! She's a Muggleborn!) and then with Muggle Medicine - it's Hermione - she had probably known most about Muggle medicine even before Hogwarts thus her dissmising Harry's suggestion is heavily unrealistic, IMHO. It's like a Muggleborn Harry was teaching a pureblood Hermione....wrong, wrong, wrong...

On the good note, I really enjoyed the introduction of Hermione's co-workers and Charlotte in the redoux version. I hope Charlotte will play a bigger role here. Also to second meeting with Hermione and Harry was a nice addition. And most of all - Nobody is much better and No one (good for changing it ), but I would use Nobody as a surname and come up with a 'normal' name for Harry's other 'persona' i.e. Jon, Gabriel, Evan or anything...

I also hope that Neville will be alive and happily married to (still blindened - it's an origianl and good idea)Ginny in the redoux version... *hint-hint*

I'm going to re-read to redoux version just to see what changes you've planned and because re-reading this story will be a pleasure.

Have a nice day!

I remember when you first wrote this and how much I loved it! I am very glad to see it again! I enjoy reading it very much!

I just left you a review on your original piece with a request for an expanded ending. Wonderful Redux so far - the writing is crisper and the plot is moving quite nicely. I can't wait to read (or re-read) more!

Ohhh, i liking this, havn't read a good angsty fic in awhile, so please keep the on updating, can't wait!!!

i never read the original. but i love this so far!!!! can't wait until next.

Heh, not a bad way to put a wizard off his game and penetrate his defences!!!

where did u go? come back please. i love your story

i like when its break up drama i think harry shuold be mean to her and push her away and harry ignores her for a while

Good! So good! Very good! I'm gonna need an update, though. I just have to see what happens next. Please?

This is a great story! But where on earth did you go? You've disappeared! I need an update! You know, for my mental health.

Heh, I liked Hermione's method of distracting Harry.

I was expecting this masquerade to go on for quite some time, but I'm pleased Hermione found him out so quickly; it would have gotten stale quite fast.

Interesting story concept; I don't have a clue what's happened to Harry. I like the idea of Voldemort's casting an AK on Hermione somehow activating an ability of Harry's - powered by 'love', Voldemort's weakness - to defend her and kill the bad guys. Don't know if that's what happened in your story though, of course.