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If this weren't so well-written, I'm sure I wouldn't be coming back to read it again- I love Hermione so much it's dangerous for me to read something that paints her as such a manipulative character. But again, in reading something negative about her (this whole series is negative when it comes to her), you actually notice her better qualities more. Excellent once again! |
Author Feedback: oh, thank you very much
and just on a side note, there is Princesses, the final part to this series, that one is actually from Hermione's perspective, it's my rather lackluster attempt at trying to ameliorate this situation and make up for that... lol. |
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heahruneSigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 04/11/08
Oh dear... Ginny and Hermione seem very fake, don't they, repressing what they really feel about each other. I see a secret hateship between them here, but that may just be me... |
Author Feedback: Hermione is more so suspicious but worried that it may be her own jealousy rather than anything really being wrong with ginny, she's more insecure than anything else. as for ginny's hatred, spot on, lol. |
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wow this is so creepy... she's crazy! Poor Neville! I just love him, he's so sweet... he would be manipulated by ginny, I know he would... oh well, nice one shot, when I have the time I'll read the others  |
Author Feedback: lol, i'm so glad you enjoyed it! |
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IxiusSigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 16/07/08
WOW, that is all i can say about this one. that she is still holding out is unbelievable. now it is time to move onto the next one.
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Author Feedback: yeah, well she's faiithful, lol.  |
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he looked at how gorgeous and beautiful Hermione was. XD
lovely. i'm loving this series.  |
Author Feedback: lol, that's about it actually |
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Err. What? lol. I thought you were going to go on with the plot and then end with Ginny's thoughts after she gets successfully married... it seems like the chapter prematurely ended. Oh well. This was unexpected so it was a treat  |
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well.... nice going. at first i thought it's all about Ginny. but i never think, and i don't want to either, that Ginny will be that horrible.
PS: i think when Ginny walked on aisle Harry will whisper to Hermione:
"She's beautiful, but not as beautiful as you."
or just mouthed:
"I love you"
well... that's what i want. hehehe... |
Author Feedback: lol i'm so glad to hear that you enjoyed it! |
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Awesome story. Love it. Absolutely loved it. I want to find out what Harry does... Do we get to find out soon??? That is, if you write another part to this. Hopefully you do. Brilliant writing, as always. I enjoy reading this. It's interesting, and it captivates my interest. |
Author Feedback:  thank you! and yes, the sequal to it (Eidetic) is already out and the prequal to the series (Princesses) just came out yesterday
thnak you again! |
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lol, i adore how positively nuts your ginny is- i wonder how long it'll be before neville realizes the questionable sanity of his bride
extremely glad that hermione objected to the albus severus name
great story |
Author Feedback: lol, sadly for nev it'll be a few years till he comes to the sad realization, but i promsie that he comes to it nonetheless (as you saw in eidetic)
as for the name... yeah, that one really just needed to be objected to at some point, didnt it? lol
p.s. so sorry for the super late resposne, i was just goig through reviews recently for ones that i missed |
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CateagleSigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 27/06/08
*laughs* Poor bit is truly deluded if she sees Hermione's behavior in that light. I almost feel sorry for Neville, getting someone like this that he's not really going to enjoy as a companion like he expects, unless she's a far better actress than she's shown so far. Meanwhile, I wonder how depressed she's going to be when Harry does not object and, in fact, congratulates Neville. |
Author Feedback: i know right, but that's just what makes it oh so much fun to write lol!
p.s. so sorry for the super late resposne, i was just goig through reviews recently for ones that i missed |
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AnonymousUnsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 26/06/08
I'm going to go out a limb here and say Harry did not stop the wedding though I would love if you wrote another one shot of it. I can't help it I've loved these little stories. I keep wondering at what point is Ginny going to get it. I swear I can see Harry and Hermione celbrating their 40th wedding anniversary and Ginny still sitting in the sidelines convinced this is the moemnt when Harry will run to her..lol |
Author Feedback: lol, that really is about ti actually! |
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AnonymousUnsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 25/06/08
What did he do? Will you please tell us? Did he stay with Hermione? He\'d better.... |
Author Feedback: lol, natrually, ginny is just a tad bit dillusional  |
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oh wow... i like how you write these, they're so well done.
I can't wait to see your next one.
keep it up
-megz- |
Author Feedback: aw thnak you, you really are much too kind |
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Harry85Signed | Chapter : 1 | Date : 24/06/08
Well, of course he didn't object  However, I know this is from Ginny's twisted perspective, but it really makes my blood boil how bad she can depict Hermione when we all know she's the bitchy, manipulative one and not the lovely brunette. |
Author Feedback: lol, well that's the irony of it. while she goes off on how manipulative Hr is she's using nev (and his love for her) as a means to an end |
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kckayeSigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 24/06/08
Now why would you marry Neville of all people off to her? YIKES Poor Neville.
And I love the fact that she is astounded by a wife saying no to her husband. Yeah because that NEVER happens in real life. God I would have vetoed Albus Severus...I think that most people would except for your (and JKR) hero-worshipping fan girl Ginny.
Could you write a fan fic in which she gets *****-slapped by Hermione? Pretty please, this Ginny needs a good A$$ kicking.  |
Author Feedback: well i got the idea from the fact that it was once possible that he coudl be the boy who lived, so i could toy with her rection to being married to "the boy who wasnt," as she puts it, lol. but i really do feel bad foor poor nev
I KNOW, right? i mean some ppl commented that the fact that she said no might be a sign of an unhealthy marriage, but i think that wiht something THAT horrid she was actually being nice by saying that lol
thanks so much for reviewing!
p.s. i'll consider it |
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