I left a response on the redux but I like this version more compared to the other though they are both good this one is just more affectionate. I can't wait to read how much he let loose.

Wow so I've read all the chapters since I've been home today this is woo, wow brillant, excellent but still has a loves prospective to it I love it. Once again love conquers lust great...but it is 4:08am and I have to get a book from school tomorrow and have a long drie in the Morning not t mention a doctor's appointment. zplease write soon! hopefully.

Please update as soon as possible. I can't wait for the next chapter.

lose the music references, it detracts from your story; occasional reference is good to emphasis a point but constantly in not. Its time to toss some Draco fights in there too. That is just too juicy to ignore and the conflict helps the story to be more than just another angst episode. I get bored with those because the meat an potatos of a good story line is lost. Let Harry have a little to whet his appetite an then take it away again because of mishaps with Ron, Ginny, and Draco. You can work that angle for five more chapters in different ways. Do forget the rest of the Weasley's. I'd love to see them become a problem for H/HR too, especially if some of their toys backfire on H/HR. That would be just too funny. Can't get it on if you're sitting there with blisters all over you or you happen to be flaming hot, smell bad, or just look odd. Turn em into chickens for 24 hours and let ron and Ginny chase them. lmao Keep it up, I'll be watching for you. Carlos

next chapter please! and i can't believe the number of stories i've read where cho's some crazy bitch-monster.

Oh yeah, Coldplay is the business. +1 if you can somehow incorporate Viva La Vida

Oh, wow, from the way you wrote I thought you were in your final year of _college_ and not _high school_. (Or are you British and call those different words?) A few thoughts...

1. H/Hr story + interaction = A+

2. The Weasley sideplot is a little confusing; I'm not sure what exactly caused the splits that you're talking about and why Ginny was engaged to Malfoy. Maybe a little more backstory would help here.

3. Constructive criticism... maybe you could try varying sentence lengths a little more, especially in dialogue. The tone is a little too uniform and maybe if you changed up the sentence structure it would "come alive". Dunno if that makes any sense...

Yay I'm glad to see Ginny's back already! I hope this is the beginning of the Weasley family being put back together. And I'm excited to see what happens when Harry gets back to the hotelllll =)

great story.
cannot wait for your next posting.will ginny/malfoy nget back with each other? i hope not!
awesome job on this!!!!

liking it,
i hope you update again soon.
and harry better not have a game in the morning if hed been drinking.
i dont really picture him risking his career.

Please update as soon as possible. I can't wait for the next chapter.

I wonder where Ginny's been and why she's in "Mortal Peril". I also can't wait to see what's going to happen in Canada.

Please update as soon as possible. I can't wait for the next chapter.

Following this story from the message boards on another site that deleted it.

I really loved it and it took me quite some time to find it. A mutual friend (Rick) sent me here. I so glad he did.

just adding to my favs. *huggles*
Hope you post more of the fic, I'm going through good H/Hr withdrawls. lol