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Great story. Ron being his usual jerk. Loved HErmione's little cheeky comments in this chapter. The last bit with Harry and Hermione was also great. Can't wait to read the sequel, i'm looking forward to that. |
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Fantastic story! Very good. I have to go read the sequel now. I'm sort of glad to be reading them when their finished. I don't have to wait. Why does it always take three times longer to write then to read. I've yet to figure that out! |
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YEAH! HERMIONE'S COMING BACK! HERMIONE'S COMING BACK! IT'S ABOUT BLOODY TIME! WAHOOOOO! |
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I didn't respond to the last chapter because i had to read this one as fast as I could. FINALLY, they got it together. Knew the would, eventually! |
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ohh, Ron is not going to take this well. However, we already know how your Hermione would respond (a negative answer) anyway, so it can't be all bad. Right? |
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The cleverness of these characters! Oh gracious, whatever shall we do with them all? |
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Hagrid is down right clever as well. It's a good think Harry and Hermione have all of these clever people around to help them out. I think they'd been lost without them. |
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This Kit girl is very clever, for a muggle, is she not? |
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Aww, how obvilivious the two of them truly are. Well, Harry at least. Very good, very good, I shall continue on. |
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How sweet of Tonks? Are you going to do the whole Remus/Tonks thing? I guess since you've already written it, I'll just have to find out. . . |
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Okay, for some reason, I am determined to write a little something for each chapter. I think the owlery is a good idea, as long as the owl (most likely Hedwig) keeps out of sight. That's probably the first thing I would have done, but, hey, I'm not distraught. |
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Yeah, I don't get why parents don't understand that whole Voldermort-is-after-me jazz. You know? I mean, it just doesn't seem like their trying.
Okay, really, I think they both need to lay off and make some sort of compromise. As kids get older they start to think like adults (even though, I fully believe Hermione Granger was thinking as an adult at the age of two!). |
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Since I reviewed both of the other chapters, doesn't seem fair to leave out the third. I like this Kit character, she's got flare. Too bad about the private school, hope it's not run by a bunch of Malfoy-like people. |
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Instead, I was supposed to somehow juggle all of that at the same time. Oh, and he was also supposed to think of someway to defeat The Dark Lord and restore peace to his world. All in a day’s work, right? Wrong.
I just wanted to point out that part of the above paragraph is in third person instead of first. Just so you know. . . |
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I think I read this before, but I'm pretty sure I didn't leave a review. Either, way, good plot. Although I can't imagaine Dumbledore really letting Hermione leave Hogwarts, despite her parents' protest. Still, though, you never really know, do you. . .? |
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