This just keeps getting better and better, more exciting every chapter. I can't wait to find out what happens next!

Mmh, I wonder what's going to happen next I hope you update soon so I can see

Wow ! Fantastic story ! Love the twist and turns the first two chapters are going. This reads like an Alfred Hitchcock story. Can't wait to see where you will go from here. Looking forward to reading more of your work. Be careful in Iraq. Come back safe and sound. Thanks for taking the time to write this story and thanks for the work you are doing in Iraq.
Lady Chancellor

hey
I am from India. I think you have been writing a very good fic so far. You know, I've always wondered why JKR has never allowed to think of Hermione as anything else other than his friend.
I have honestly never understood the intention of Ron's worst fears being exposed by voldemort. I knew he was insecure about not being upto his brothers , but his own family rejecting him over Harry?
It is Rowling's horrible attempt to show that Ron is not so superficial anymore and that he craves love more than wealth, and fame, which is somewhat ridiculous because thats what Harry craves , love over everything else.
Personally I believe rowling realized that she had screwed up with HBP and so wanted to salvage the situation while mocking H/Hr lovers in the books.

Please reply back.

Reading this, I suddenly realized how Ron must feel in all of those Portkey stories that just put him on the side as the jealous sidekick. Except you had Harry instead of Ron, lol. Hopefully you have something more meaningful to give than the rest of the stories here that stick Ron with Luna and pretend he's all happy and all is well. I seriously just realized how much it sucks to be Ron here on Portkey.

I'm not sure what exactly happened here... so Harry was sitting there thinking about R/Hr (I think I've been trained to feel a visceral repulsion when I think about Ron and Hermione together. It's weird). Then he talks to Hermione, she leaves, then he falls asleep and during his dream ("dream") he writes a bunch of stuff, then gets woken up to find that he didn't write anything at all? Maybe in future chapters if you're going to write dream-wake-up sequences it would help if it was more clear what was dream and what was real. Or if the vagueness is part of the plot device (your summary seemed to indicate that dreaming was a big part of the story), I'm not sure why it is -- maybe write something in that shows why the vague line between dream and reality matters.

It seems like you might be setting something up for Hermione liking Harry with the interaction in this chapter -- looking forward to see what happens next.

(Wait, you're going to Iraq for an entire year? And not as a soldier? Eh?)

First of all, I hate Ron! I hate that he is Head Boy (Who would make that prat a Head Boy). But, all that hate aside, it was a very good second chapter - the mystery surrounding Harry is growing. I feel that Harry is a bit of a martyr here - very troubled...anyway, I am looking forward to seeing what is coming next! Great Job!

great job! keep up the great work on it!i cant wait to read the rest of it!

Okay I hate to say it but Im starting to loose track of whats a dream and whats reality. And I need a happy Harry & Hermione some time soon...please?

Okay so a little confused there but Id like to read more, are you planning an evil Ron or is that just part of Harry's fears playing out in the dream?
Great job though cant wait for more!

Holy CRAP! I know what that last part was inspired by! I recognize several of those lines! But I won't spoil it for anyone else.

VERY promising beginning. And talk about turning from angsty/sweet to damn creepy...Harry's subconscious is really doing a number on him. I sincerely hope that he can indeed tell Hermione his true feelings before she can make even more horrible mistakes...

Keep it up!

great job! this chapter was really good! i cant wait to read the rest of it!keep up the excellent work on it!

That was one dark, intense, angsty opening chapter. I realize that there will probably be a fair bit amount of that in this story. Anyway, it was a great first effort - even though canon dictates that Ron & Hermione are fated - I totally disagree and still cringe whenever I read the pairing. I look forward to seeing where you are going to take this - as this Harry seems to be a bit darker and no longer afraid of taking what he wants. I am hoping that through all of the angst this story will end with some Harmony. Keep up the good work!

What can I say, it did seem strange that Harry would act that way, luckily it was only a dream. Although, I seriously doubt Harry would be able to act that way even in a twisted dream.

Hey, interesting first chapter, I thought that it was abit strange that Harry would use crucio on Ron, but then he was only dreaming! Keep it up and update soon!!

I have to admit: when I started reading this, my mouse was hovering over the close button. But seeing as it was close to 1 AM, my mind was not in its right state.

I actually like it so far. The evil/crazy Harry at the end was a nice touch; left me wanting more.

I'm gonna wait for the next chapter so hurry up!