I read through this story all tonight and I have to say it was just great overall... not too smutty and it keeps the humor up while dealing with real problems...

awww the ending was so cute!! i love how her nickname is hooters tho. hahahah really funny. interesting story!

Didn't really have the energy tonight to go back and read the revisions, but I'm sure you did well with them.

This update actually made me realize how much I'd hate to have to learn nicknames for so many people. Granted, it wouldn't be a problem for someone of Hermione's brainpower, but I'd hate to be thrust into a situation where I don't know a lot of people and actually have to learn two sets of names for everyone.

At any rate, I enjoyed this chapter quite a bit, particularly the closing scene. I'm definitely looking forward to more.

Its been a while but you sure have set this up well.
Now comes the Coven's power and how they will support their sisters and Harry!

;-)

You know, most good fanfiction falls into the category of "interesting" and "entertaining" mostly because it capitalise on the already established universe and letting us experience how the characters we love behave in various situations. And while your story archives this marvellously as well, it goes further, this is intelligent writing; from the witty banter that makes me crack a smile in every chapter to the nicknames given to the various prefects. A real story line has yet to evolve but I'm still reading with glee just because of the plot-device you've got going and the great writing. Congratulations on ranking as one of the best fanfiction authors I've read.

very nice chapter. Love the nicknames, particularily Hermione's reasoning. Keep up the good work & looking forward to more.

Loved it! Harry finding out about Hermione's nickname and then using it on her was priceless. Helene working for the French was a bit of a surprise, but I echo her hope that there won't be a conflict of interest. I won't hold my breath though. I do hope we see her again over the Christmas hols or if Hermione and/or Harry has a reason to flee from Hogwarts.

You really do "banter" incredibly well! I just loved the scene in the common room. I hope that Hermione will stop denying and the Harry will get a clue. The whole Coven thing sounds like it could be very supportive of Hermione when the time comes to a) get Harry and b) fight Voldemort. Great job!

Although I do read and enjoy "Muggle Summer", I am glad you added to this story- since it has so many possiblities. Can't wait to see how 'Hooters' and the coven deal with the toad and how she reacts to Snape 'teaching' Harry Occlumency. Personly i beleive that Harry will be told of the Coven

And our girl is back in the game!!!!!!
Hoot!!
Don't let him off the hook, girl! Eat feathers, Cho!!
So, is Sirius going to spend quality time with Helene? Big, wonderful Xmas reunion? Safe haven for family???
So very glad to see this back, thanks for the more.

Hello Canoncansodoff,

Another good update.

Nice to see that Harry was allowed to remember Hermione's coven nickname.

I wonder where you are going with the French DGSE agent.

I look forward to next chapter on both this and Muggle Summer.

Regards

Lancelot47

which story to beg you to update first. I love how you've made hermione more of a flirt then she is in cannon, at times it seems like its really not her, but when i think about it there are actually times where it makes sense. shes so reserved all the time when she finally opens up maybe she goes over board with it. In this chapter and in Muggle Summer you have her making many cheeky comments, and yet it feels like it is and isn't hermione. Good work, keep it up.

Loved it! Especially the part about Hermione and Hedwig. I love fanfics where the trio and people connected to them have conversations with Hedwig, and other people become surprised that she understands them.

You got me intrigued, though, about what Helene Brixton and what she was thinking about...

I hope you update soon

Loved it! Especially the part about Hermione and Hedwig. I love fanfics where the trio and people connected to them have conversations with Hedwig, and other people become surprised that she understands them.

You got me intrigued, though, about what Helene Brixton and what she was thinking about...

I hope you update soon

"Hooters"??
A fun chappie of another of my favorite stories of yours.
The teasing at the end between Harry and Hermione was very nicely done and made me lol.