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Thank you for this story and the time
and effort that you have put in to it.
Please ignore any and all flames.Enjoy
your self when you write and have fun
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AnonymousUnsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 16/11/08
Amazing! Wonderful. That's how it is with them - no grand gesture, just the true feeling.  |
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lampessaSigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 20/08/08
Hi VipyGirl831, (Insert Large and Hopefully Charming Toothy Grin here)
I have no idea why I read this all the way through. (Refer to above grin please.) I think this is the third time I've read this story but I don't have a clue why I don't skip over it once I realize the POV thing. Generally I find stories written from 2nd person POV to be clunky and too dramatic. I must also say that most of them read like lectures. I don't feel drawn in by them because I'm picturing myself the lecturer, following the main character around telling them they did this and they did that... surely they'd remember it since they were the person doing it???
(Warning... Tangent Alert! I often want to flame 2nd person POV stories by typing something like, "You sat down at the keyboard and for some reason typed out a crappy story and then posted it..." I'm not a huge flamer though. I find the more nice encouragement I give, the more really good stories the authors share with us, and having something to read keeps me going.)
Inked Revelations is lovely. It doesn't read like a list of events at all. It feels more like found poetry or a song. It has a lovely sort of a rythm to it, always rounding back to the chorus, a variation on - But you know that it meant more than they are willing to reveal; more than you wish it did. By the end of the story I wanted to sing along. |
Author Feedback: Hey lampessa!
I finally got around to checking back on my stories to make sure I hadn't missed replying to any reviews, so that's why I'm finally replying to yours, several months after you wrote it.
I completely understand how you feel about 2nd person POV fics... but I decided to take a chance with this one. I'm glad I did, and I'm very glad you took a chance in reading it all the way through.
Thanks for the lovely review. You're very kind. |
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apaidanSigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 04/08/08
A wonderful story. It's rare that Ginny gets treated as an adult, but you did a very good job with that. You created a good look at her as the inevitability of things unfolded for her, and how she didn't totally handle them, but didn't resort to the infamous Weasley temper, either. Ron was still Ron, but this was a more mature and sadder Ginny. Nicely written |
Author Feedback: Yeah, normally, I just like to bash Ginny, really. Lol.
But this time, I dunno, I just tried something different I guess.
Glad you enjoyed it! |
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This is an amazing story. One of my favorites, it's very well written. It's also true to the series while twisting it into something of your own. |
Author Feedback: Thanks! Glad you enjoyed it... A year ago. Lol. I'm slow at looking at reviews after I post the story. |
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chelley83Signed | Chapter : 1 | Date : 17/06/08
that was actually really good, i was hesitant about reading it but i really loved it...thanks for writing it |
Author Feedback: Thanks! I'm glad you decided to give it a chance and that you enjoyed it! |
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AnonymousUnsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 14/06/08
Wow, that pretty much sums up how H/Hr would work out in a perfect, canon world. I could see that easily occur in DH. It was written perfectly, well done. |
Author Feedback: Haha. Thanks! We can only dream, I suppose.
Thanks again, you're too kind. |
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AinaUnsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 13/06/08
Woah I SO loved it! The style was very effective as well. 
This is very H/Hr... And this was what would\'ve really happened if they all came back at Hogwarts after the battle... One of my fave post-Dh, pre-Epilogue stories!!! |
Author Feedback: Thanks very much!
I wish this, or something like it, would have happened!
Good way of decribing it-- post-DH, pre-Epilogue... should have used that in the summary! |
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Wow! This is really well done. I liked the repetition of the lines at the beginning and end of each section, and the part "But you know that it meant more than they are willing to reveal; more than you wish it did." Nice! |
Author Feedback: Thank you.
I tend to enjoy repetition in fics, and though I didn't plan it here, it just flowed that way. ^^ |
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salethUnsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 12/06/08
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Author Feedback: Thanks!
Haha. Well, I was lucky to have done that! I tend to really enjoy both of those things as well! |
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Very well written. Its been awhile since i read something really good. Keep it coming. |
Author Feedback: Thank you very much! Glad you thought so! |
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fantastic as always
really poignant. I almost felt sorry for Ginny! (almost...  )
I loved how you repeated the first line of each part near the end it was really effective.
All four were really in character too, loved it |
Author Feedback: Aw, thanks!
I know right... I was almost ashamed of myself for almost making her look like a decent human being. Haha.
Thanks again!
By the way, I can't tell you how much I'm enjoying your newest fic. It's absolutely fantastic. ^^ |
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I really like the tattoo idea and also the way you show the H/Hr relationship (quiet but perfectly complementary). Basically, all of the conversation lines and all the implied emotions were extremely well written  . |
Author Feedback: Thank you very much!
On a side note, I really like your username. ^^
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papermaskSigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 10/06/08
SO. GOOD. I really enjoyed this story. Very unique and creative. I like this a lot.  |
Author Feedback: Thank you very much. Glad you thought so! |
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Reallly beatiful, I usually enjoy Ginny's suffering in this kind of fic, but with this one is was bittersweet... I even liked her a bit... poor thing, Harry and Hermione are perfect, and she knows it... |
Author Feedback: Thanks!
I found, as I was writting it, that I liked her a bit as well... kinda creeped me out, honestly, since I tend to very much dislike her! |
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