CokieismeSigned | Chapter : 26 | Date : 22/12/08
I don't know. Some say they do. I'm always happy for them if they're right.
Hermione has always been right by his side so many times. (I don't count that time she didn't believe about Malfoy, HBP is crazy) I love his part in the beginning of the chapter, talking about his not being the best friend and about Hermione talking a lot, but not much about herself.
Update soon, I'll be on the lookout. |
Author Feedback:  see the delusional me seems to conveniently forget the events of HBP too  I think Harry only remembers that Hermione has been his most loyal friend...she stayed with him when there wasn't a lot a of hope left during DH and really without her things would have been very different.
But you don't need me to tell you that!  The next one is almost finished. |
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AnonymousUnsigned | Chapter : 26 | Date : 22/12/08
what is this story the sacrifice! who is the author? I would like to read this |
Author Feedback: The Sacrifice is the one shot I wrote right after DH was published set the night of the DH Epilogue. It is the prequel to this fic and can be found on ffnet. |
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AnonymousUnsigned | Chapter : 26 | Date : 22/12/08
ohhhhh, that last line....
i've noticed in alot of fics, drawing out the discovery of their feelings is either not done or not done right...but your choice i believe has been correct and done so well.
and hermione being that much of a sweet bitch about such inconveniences as not being able to drive and harry being amused by it was great. the way you've written them is a new perspective but you can easily imagine them that comfortable post-DH. |
Author Feedback: I'm guilty of writing fics that haven't drawn out how they discovered their feelings for one another well and it's mostly been Harry who I've had problems with. And it's so hard to write about love.
There is extreme pressure writing in Portkey to make this all sweet and perfect and it's hard for me to imagine the Harry who was committed to Ginny in books 6 and 7 would easily suddenly dump her and find Hermione.
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I love how Harry keeps calling Hermione's date the wrong name. In a lot of ways, that's the tragedy of JKR's ultimate pairings -- you've illustrated how well-suited Harry & Hermione are for each other, though they are both too noble to see it.
I hope the story picks up right from here -- I'm interested to see Hermione's reaction (and maybe you'll describe more of Harry's "artwork" in the "master bedroom"?
To answer your question, though, I think that love that lasts is something that gradually grows (like Harry's & Hermione's friendship over a number of years). I think you get to the point that you realize that you can't imagine the other person not in your life. Well, at least, that's how it worked for me :-) |
Author Feedback: I enjoyed making up the many names for Hermione's date too
Ah, Harry's artwork in the master bedroom - I was thinking about that as I was writing it and wondered if someone would notice I didn't describe it in detail. Actually it was more like hoped someone wouldn't  I'll see what I can do.
And I like what you said about lasting love as something that gradually grows and how you can't imagine that other person not in your life. Thanks for answering the question. |
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LuniSigned | Chapter : 26 | Date : 21/12/08
I'm so crazy about this story it isn't even funny. Loved your Harry, no matter how much trouble he gave you.
I've just re-re-re-re-read the Sacrifice, and I feel we're about to enter the events Hermione is thinking about. I can't wait!!! Please update fast, this is absolutely addictive.
Cheers, Luni |
Author Feedback: The next one is almost finished...if you loved the Harry in this one you'll love him even more in the next  And you are right, we are about to enter the time Hermione was thinking about.
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AnonymousUnsigned | Chapter : 26 | Date : 21/12/08
fORTGOT TO MENTION THIS AT THE END OF MY REVIEW
***HAPPY HOLIDAYS*****
***HAPPY NEW YEAR***** |
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AnonymousUnsigned | Chapter : 26 | Date : 21/12/08
Great chapter! With there conversation, their back & forth, playfullness, and the ease with each other that us looking in can see that that they are truely in love and meant to be! THEY JUST DON'T KNOW IT YET?.
tHE ANSWER TO YOU QUESTION. WHEN THEY COME TO THE QUESTION OF WE KNOWN EACH OTHER SINCE WE WERE 11, AND HAVE THIS STRONG UNCONDITIONAL, BEST MATES, STRONG FOUNDATION, THAN YES YOU JUST KNOW? THAT YOU CAN NOT EVER BE WITHOUT THAT PERSON IN YOUR LIFE, JUST LIKE YOU HAVE TO BREATH TO LIVE! EAT TO SURVIVE! |
Author Feedback: I love what you said about realizing you can never be without that person in your life.
And they are both overthinking this - making it more complicated. Hermione has no clue Harry is interested in her that way and Harry is hesitant to make the move because he's not sure about himself and how crossing the line will affect their friendship.
THanks for the review and happy rest of the holidays to you. |
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Author Feedback: I seem to have taken to heart the last part of your review (about not rushing with the Holidays  ) but hope to post soon.
Appreciate your answer to the question - you have a good point. In the previous chapter Hermione had to think her feelings through. Many of us need to make this feeling more real  and it sometimes ruins it all. |
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GiringiroSigned | Chapter : 26 | Date : 21/12/08
Oh, and I didn't like the part where Harry went to Hermione's house while she was out and then he painted a room and arranged a bed and imagined sleeping with the girl he hadn't the guts to ask out. That was borderline creepy...
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Author Feedback: 
I never thought of it as creepy but interesting POV nonetheless. |
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GiringiroSigned | Chapter : 26 | Date : 21/12/08
Wondering how one does know for sure, is a decent hint one does.
The conversation in the car was funny, but I got lost when Harry mentioned expectations and not needing to meet Hermione's. Besides thinking he usually exceeds them, I could not decide whether that was just good-natured banter, or you were hinting at a real problem you saw between them.
We're now at chapter eleven in the flashback and I'm starting to understand and care about these characters, as much as and perhaps more than the ones in the present (at the beginning, it was the other way round). The plot is getting interesting but also slowing down, though that might be just an impression of mine.
Best season's whatevers.
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Author Feedback: i'm kind of late but happy holidays to you too
thanks for weighing in on the question - excelllent point,
The conversation about expectations was intended to banter but as Harry alluded there is a bit of truth in it. There are certain things in life that we would only do because of it is expected of us (the degree each person does this varies fom one to the next) - and in some cases this is actually a good thing. It was to point out the undesirable extreme of being complacent about how people, who understand us most and who we're quite at home to be just ourselves with, can get burned. Is it a real problem between them? It only becomes a problem if Hermione thinks so and starts resenting it.
I'm glad you are starting to care about the characters of the past. And I agree that the plot is slowing down - I committed myself to the pace the second I decided to tell the story of their past in detail. I do appreciate the patience my readers have with me. |
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it was nice to look at Harry and see what he thinks. ohh. his thoughts are all over the place but always land in one person (Hermione of course. :] ).
i couldn't find the places that seemed unnecessary. hmm. iono. it seemed like everything here fit and made sense. really. lol.
wonderful chapter. thank you much. looking at their past always makes me squee and suffer (for the things that the went through). |
Author Feedback: thanks for the review - hope you're having a happy holiday.
We're only getting started with their good past - more to come. |
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gravacorSigned | Chapter : 26 | Date : 21/12/08
I don't think one just knows. The idea or possibility exists, an idea to consider it. It sbould be less with them since they should know each other so well. We know that Hermione is and feels like the rebound girl ( a comment from an earlier chapter). I loved Hermione and the driving situation. I need her for my commutes. How much am I going to hate Harry when this goes south? Why is the master bedroom not getting used or did I read something wrong? This house definitely needs to stay theirs. |
Author Feedback: Hermione will explain why she hasn't been using the master bedroom. And i think you'll hate the author more than Harry when this goes south but first we have to make it go to next level. have to address the Ginny issue.
thank you for your response to the question - i think as one matures there is a tendency to approach new emotions/feelings like so. but when some people have an ideal of what they think love should feel like it becomes a bit complicated. |
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MaDeLaiNeSigned | Chapter : 25 | Date : 16/12/08
My dear BB,
I hereby declare you my Favourite Person of the Day, possible the Week  .
You were sooo right. The Sacrifice helped me LOADS to relief my anxious mind.THANK YOU!
I can now imagine, or at least suspect, that it wasn't that they didn't want each other. So it was their being noble... The Sacrifice is a fit title, indeed. Damn it, Harry even gave her... (don't want to spoil for others, you know what it was  ). Something had to happened to be married that fast..
I really really can't wait now! But I think that thanks to your superquick and nice answer, I'll be able to read this without missing chappies.
Or not, no idea, lol.
See you around, dear! And thanks again!
Madelaine -
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Author Feedback:
You're welcome.
I'm glad reading the Sacrifice helped |
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MaDeLaiNeSigned | Chapter : 25 | Date : 16/12/08
Hey BB!
It's been a while, I know...the real truth is that your fics amaze me, but I just discovered that I can't really bear the anxiety very well... Your stories are amazing, and I've been always following them in the process..but I really have enough anxiety already in real life..
But I'm also weak, so I had to peek, lol. And the outcome was what I was telling you: anxious! :
For some reason today I just read something I had missed the first time: that Hermione was Harry's gilfriend for some amount of time. I had assumed they had had the affair and only that.
This new fact made me think then of some timeline of sorts, based on Hugo's age and your dates.
We're in 2003 and still Harry and Hermione are nothing (not for long, I guess).
In 2021,Hugo is 13, and Harry confesses he had the affair 14 years ago, that is, in 2007.
He and Ginny already had 2 children, and was pregnant with the third. So I think they had been married, at least (and according to the books, I think the epilogue is inflkkuencing me in this, when you could be changing it) for 3 o 4 years.
This is, 2003?
As you can imagine, I can't live with the questions in the air, lol. I can't really wait to know what happened to them to, in the span of months? they went from being in love to marry other people. Was it secret or something?
I know you'll explain things in time, so, I'll just have to hope for you to update and update until I can gette answers
But if you can help me with the timeline, it would be a relief, to be honest...
Great Fic, BB.
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Author Feedback:
It's good to hear from you. And I am glad you decided to take a peek despite the anxiety my fics bring you
From your review, it doesn't seem like you need help with the timelines at all. In fact you're probably one of the few who has taken time to trace back. These next few months away from Ginny and Ron will be interesting for them
The fic is based on all of DH and contradictions you find will be unintentional. If you read the prequel on ffnet (the Sacrifice) you might get a better overview of the sequence of events up until the Epilogue except for what really happened between Harry and Hermione which I'm trying to get to as I'm writing about the past.
I am as anxious as you are even though I know what happened and I'm trying my best to hurry things and get to the why's. You might want to take a peek again three or four chapters down the linem
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AnonymousUnsigned | Chapter : 25 | Date : 13/12/08
after reading this chapter
of course, i wanted more
which isn't too surprising
this has been one of the best stories for a long time.
so i looked up and read 'the sacrifice' and it definitely helped! haha
are you going to follow the outline of that story, exactly here? because i can't wait to read about what happened during those "three idyllic months" and what happened to change all that.
can't wait for the next chapter! |
Author Feedback: Thanks for reminding me about the sacrifice - I do intend to follow the outline of the story for this past and get to the part why that ended.
I'm glad you're enjoying the fic and reading the sacrifice does make all this waiting for the present kind of tolerable. |
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