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gravacor
Signed | Chapter : 22 | Date : 17/11/08
Unfortunately I can't think of any good names for Hermione. I came up with Resurrection girl or crypt girl (or even keeper). I could see it being an inside joke for them for years to come.
 

Harry85
Signed | Chapter : 22 | Date : 14/11/08
Mmh, their bosses are laying it pretty heavy, aren't they? Anyway, when will the recollection of the past end and the present pick up? We are already at a third of PP's lenght and we have close to nothing about the present situation, who atatcked Hermione, why, etc. And most of all, why Harry is still married to Ginny No, just kidding, that's not the most important part to know, but I'm really curious about how and why they got married and how they managed to keep it going for so long...wouldn't have bet half a Galleon on it...
 

Tank03
Signed | Chapter : 22 | Date : 11/11/08
I still haven't read this yet (I'm still waiting for it to be finished) but when I saw a new update I felt I should, again, let you know that there are readers who appreciate all that you have shared and who are really looking forward to diving into this one whenever it may be finished.

I'm certain that it is going to be a wonderful story and, though I'm sorry I am not contributing any meaningful feedback now, I am truly thankful that you are writing and sharing.

Keep up the great work!
Author Feedback: thanks for the vote of confidence = though I must mention that just the thought that there's someone out there waiting for me to finish before reading is nerve racking.
 

gravacor
Signed | Chapter : 22 | Date : 10/11/08
If you are going to name Harry Coffin boy, we need an equally "deathly" name for Hermione, since she is still thought to be dead. But talk about some dreary pet names? Could give new meaning to Death Day Party. Loved the awkward interaction between the two, including Harry trying to say that she did an amazing job, but still trying to keep it professional. The slight jabs that he felt, when she was saying that there are no good guys left as well sure seemed to be screaming notice me, and then her look in his eyes saying well almost all. Just one more step to the incident.
Author Feedback: A deathly name for Hermione hmmm...will mull it over but suggestions are most welcome.

And the rant was as you aptly put it 'screaming notice' though I don't think Hermione intended to deliver it and deliver it to a limited audience

Thanks for taking the time to review.
 

Cokieisme
Signed | Chapter : 22 | Date : 10/11/08
"“I had a dream that you died,” he paused, the frown turning into more of a grimace, “It was so vivid I had to know that you didn’t. That’s why I called.”"

Oh wow. I loved that.

Coffin Boy!!! Great name. Please update soon, I'll be waiting!!!!

Author Feedback: I'm working on the next one. Thank you for that feedback about the dream...I was wondering if it was a bit too much.
 

MyUsedRomance
Signed | Chapter : 22 | Date : 10/11/08
ahh. my heart always breaks when Harry says things like that. seriously that man is just so very much worth it. gahhh. i loved it; you always seem to include everything in a story -- humor to angst. love. love it. thank you.
Author Feedback: I'm just glad people find the story funny too. We all need humour in life. And love, definitely love. The angst not so much but having them makes us appreciate the moments without them even more thanks for the continuing encouragement.
 

eowyn83
Unsigned | Chapter : 22 | Date : 10/11/08
Sniffle... I so love these Harry and Hermione interactions that you are doing. It provides the canvas for the affair and how right they are with each other. I loved Dean in this, too. now I'm sad because I know that he died. I am intrigued at the Jedi mind power that harry and Warren used. is it a kind of imperius?

Looking forward to your next chapters.
Author Feedback: It's great to know that my attempt at trying to establish the setting for the affair has not gone unnoticed . A while back a reviewer pointed out that TPP would have benifited from having more of this (but we all know that was horribly long enough! )

The Jedi mind power is a kind of imperius. I probably missed the opportunity to explain further why Harry and Warren resorted to it in the end and didn't with 'Gaunt' but it will come up again at some point.

Thanks for the feedback.
 

Anonymous
Unsigned | Chapter : 22 | Date : 10/11/08
What a fantastic chapter!!absolutly from beging to end.

Dean was absolutly funny with the wittiness of his questions. Harry you might want to put some clothes back on!

Also you might want to rub off Hermion's lipstick from you mouth!

And it will be easier for you two to pretend that never happend .

And then asking how was it Soooo funny!!!.
then hermione telling harry don't you dare answer that, He promises not to tell??

And then when they were finishing the paperwork Dean was still teasing her saying all the moaning and groaning!

Hermione: we had to do it,

Dean: of course it was part of the job and you would have done it even if it weren't harry

Then dean went on to say if that situation came up between them he would rather die .

Then the last part when that say harry, Dean saying that hermione made a new name for harry, and Hermione saying no I didn't but laughing, then Dean went on to say THE BOY WHO SNOGGED ME IN THE COFFIN: COFFIN BOY FOR SHORT! PRICELESS

Gates made me sich with the way he was looking at hermione gaucking at her, his rude comment's Who would have known, and the pig went on to say the whore and i will pretend to look for privacy YUK . WHY DIDN'T HARRY SAY SOMETHING??

The breakfast together was very nice,and the comment about him rubbing his hands together, very observent on her part, there conversation was so natural, and relaxing. There conversaton about relationships and hermione saying she's no good at it,and nobody was really interested, and if they were they were pigs only willing to run base' and not knowing the pitch. Here goes hermione with the lack of seeing that she is so much more, and harry tring to tell her. Harry said some pretty amazing things about her, and yet she didn't see again,.

I like what Hermione elaborated on about:WHERE HAVE ALL THE FLOWER'S GONE? AND DON'T GET ME STARTED ABOUT THOSE WHO PRETEND THEY'RE NIGHT'S AND CAN'T STAY ON THE BLOODY HORSE, THE ARMOUR IS TRANISHED, CHILVARY IS DEAD!, GENERATIONS OF WOMEN BEFORE US HAD IT AND WE WON'T EVER EXPERIENCE IT. OUR DAUGHTER'S AND THEIR DAUGHTER'S WON'T KNOW WHAT IT'S LIKE! YOUR DAMN RIGHT I BITTER!.

I JUST LOVE THAT WHO PARAGHRAPH IT IS SO TRUE.

Then it finally came why he needed to talk to her about a bad dream? about here dying? What the hell is harry able to see the future, or just with hermione??
Author Feedback: I'm glad you enjoyed this one. I never really know if what I write is funny to others if not for feedback like yours. Thanks.

And Hermione's rant about the lack of true knights

Right now, 'this seeing into the future' is one of. But that can always change.

Thanks again.
 

DonovanPotter
Signed | Chapter : 22 | Date : 10/11/08
oh my oh my oh my. Well, that's a pretty good reason for him to call her. Do we find out more in the next chapter? And she won't take being fired very well, but I guess that's the reason she changed jobs and got herself into trouble. Another great chapter - good work.
Author Feedback: Thanks for reviewing

Yes - there is more to the dream and I'll try to start the next one chapter with it. We'll also find out whether or not she gets fired.
 

harrynmione4ever
Signed | Chapter : 22 | Date : 09/11/08
Great action, though I am confused a bit. Park really is not Gaunt, right? I'm having trouble connecting him to the rest of the story, other than being something in the past between Hermione and Gates.

The breakfast scene at the end was very bittersweet. Can't wait to see your next chapter!
Author Feedback: Gaunt is Parak - Park is Gaunt. Sorry for the confusion and yes- Hermione and Warren had a disagreement about him.

Am working on the next one.
 

harrynmione4ever
Signed | Chapter : 21 | Date : 09/11/08
I liked the technological aspect of this chapter, and Harry's & Hermione's ease of subterfuge, but I do wonder about the current situation (what's Jessie doing now? what's Hermione doing in the lake with Dumbledore?). I hope we get back there again soon.
Author Feedback: Thank you for the encouraging review and the reminder to get on with the current situation. Unfortunately it'll be a while before we get back to the present. Although I think the more I get these kinds of reviews the quicker I want to get there.

Thanks again.
 

starla ann grace
Unsigned | Chapter : 21 | Date : 04/11/08
WOW I love this story I am excited to Know what happens next are you planning to update soon. I really hope.
Author Feedback: Most days I wish I had the time and inspiration to write faster - I hope I can update soon too.

thanks for reviewing!
 

Harry85
Signed | Chapter : 21 | Date : 04/11/08
Well, as I said last time, I don't care much for the past, but of course you're totally free to write the story the way you want it.

That said, I didn't mind that last scene too much
Author Feedback: I didn't think anyone would mind that last scene
 

mi.nathy
Unsigned | Chapter : 21 | Date : 04/11/08
From your authors note, I thought you were going to write Dean's death so now I am confused at what exactly was the reaction you were expecting?...I think I might have an idea but at this point for me your story is still a roller coaster ride and I cannot wait to read what your next chapter will be about...happy writing...
Author Feedback: It's always good to watch out for those darn angst writers

I apologize for the cryptic author's note - I should have shared what I meant about that at the end of the chapter. The decision to get Harry and Hermione to snog in that chapter was last minute and I wasn't sure how that would work with what was to come. It was a good decision, I think, but I never know what will come back to bite me whenever I do that.

Dean will be around for a bit longer.
 

Luni
Signed | Chapter : 21 | Date : 03/11/08
I know you went back to the past to get some relief from all the present angst, but I can't help wanting to see more of the present. But mostly, I want Harry to see Hermione alive. It's something that has always peeved me in your story: the intensity-lacking reaction of Harry to Hermione's death. I expected a LOT more. Isn't she supposed to be the true love of his life? I read your "prologue" and they were even engaged before something happened... I really want to see what you'll do with present.

Keep up the amazing work, and thanks.
Author Feedback: Thanks for your honest review. As I mentioned to another reviewer I always intended this story to be a story within a story. I want to write how their friendship evolved into something more and it's kind of hard to do it quickly(something I realized only recently).

About Harry's reaction to Hermione's 'death' - I think people react to terrible news differently and I'm sorry to hear that Harry's reaction in this one did not meet your expectations. There was this funeral scene that made me cry as I was writing it but I wanted Hermione alive and didn't want to jerk Harry/you readers around. I guess you can say I chickened out Harry has instead been obsessing about finding justice and truth which could be a manner of grieving or, if you can imagine, avoiding grief itself.

I know many are keen about the present but the past is so important to this being an HHr fic. After I'm done with the past do let me know if it was worth it.
 

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