Mmh, I've never read your story before, I don't know what to expect then, but I'm willing to see.

Whoa. Very dramatic. But I really liked it. I\'m glad you\'re re-doing this one first. Thanks for comming back to writing!

Interesting. I cannot wait to see where the story goes from here.

This is a good start. It was dramatic enough to grab me and the spelling was good. I can forgive problems with usage if it's not too careless. I want to read more.
When you can... Old Chuck

I hadn\'t read this before,but I\'m glad I started now great start. I can\'t wait for more.
Thanks for writing again.

OMG! I love this and I didn't read the first one but I really can't wait for an update! PLease update this soon!

I am so glad that you've decided to rewrite this story. It is one of my favorites. I can't wait to see where you finally take us! Great job!

Great chapter. I remember you from fanfiction.net. You wrote some Smallville stuff that was really good too. especially the one with Doomsday.