aracneSigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 11/10/08
oh what a beautiful secene, I loved the idea of the glass window, really nice |
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apaidanSigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 01/08/08
a very good story, in and of itself. Harry's rambling finally gets everything out. I really like the imagery you use with the light contrasting with the dust of the old facility |
Author Feedback: Thank you very much! I really appreciate it! |
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AnonymousUnsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 29/06/08
Really interesting. I am going to read second chapter. You did a great job with this!  |
Author Feedback: Sorry about the second chapter - it's just an author's note. :/ But, thank you so much for the review and kind words - I really appreciate it! |
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I like the use of the prayer, and you really have a way with words. Nice job! |
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PortusSigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 13/06/08
Very nice. Just the right amount of heartache and promise of a better, brighter future.
Great job! |
Author Feedback: Yay, I'm so glad that you liked it. Thank you so much for reading and for the review! |
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awwww so nice, even if i don't like post-epilogue stories this one was amazing, please make one more with those two getting married in this church, just them and them alone it would be so beautiful
please make more
CP09 |
Author Feedback: I'll definitely consider making a story with them getting married in the same church. I like the idea. Thank you so much for reading and reviewing! |
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CoregondSigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 11/06/08
I like it. It has a bit of a solemn theme to it, not a fast-paced thing, but a little bit of slow tension. Good idea using a church. I'm Catholic, and though some may say it, I don't see what the problem is with using a church as a setting. It's not like they are defacing it, just talking out their problems in a peaceful setting. That's a good thing about churches, you can go to them and just meditate. Good job with this one, keep on writing! |
Author Feedback: I totally agree with you on the church topic. I'm Episcopalian, and I don't see any problems with combining the Harry Potter series with Christianity. I mean, the whole series is about good defeating evil, and teaches friendship, love, etc. But I digress. Thank you so much for reading and for the review! I'm glad that you enjoyed the story. |
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Oh my goodness..
What an absolutly LOVELY story..
& thank merlin for the break up.
Harry and Ginny?
I mean COME ON!
I enjoyed this story a whole lot. It was wonderfully written and exectued!!
- Pour Toujours |
Author Feedback: Thank you so much! I know, Harry/Ginny is so stupid, you know? But we all know Harry and Hermione prevail together. But I digress. Anyway, thank you so much for reading and for the review! |
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Gorgeous story. I love how you used the prayer. Very beautiful, and I love the fact that the church was where Harry's parents were married. It's just a wonderfully written story. |
Author Feedback: Thank you very much! I really appreciate the kind words and the comment. Thank you for reading and for revieiwng! |
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SearcySigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 06/06/08
This is absolutely gorgeously written. I especially love the ending and the bit about the church being where his parents were married. Thank you so much for sharing. |
Author Feedback: Wow, thank you so much! I am so happy to hear that you enjoyed the story. Thank you so much for reading and the kind review. |
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FlameButtSigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 06/06/08
That was really lovely; I've got tears in my eyes as I sit here at work eating my lunch... |
Author Feedback: Aww, I didn't mean to make you tear up! But I'm glad that you liked it. Thank you so much for reading and for the kind review!  |
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JoanaUnsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 06/06/08
WOW, good piece of work!
Love it, but you should write more of it!
Don`t let this story end here! MORE! |
Author Feedback: Thank you so much! For now I'm not going to write more to this, as I don't really have any ideas on how to continue it, but if I find a way, I might continue it. Thank you so much for the review! |
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Harry85Signed | Chapter : 1 | Date : 06/06/08
No no, I knew they had never been married  I meant, we don't know why his marriage with ginny and hers with ron failed, and why their relationship with each other was strained in the meantime. |
Author Feedback: OH I see. Heh heh, sorry about that. |
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Harry85Signed | Chapter : 1 | Date : 06/06/08
It was a nice short piece, although it does seem a bit sudden. I mena, we have no insight into Hermione and Harry's own marital problems and why their relationship was strained while they were married. |
Author Feedback: Ah, I was afraid this would happen. Once I uploaded this piece I realised that some people would think that Harry and Hermione were married. What I meant when I wrote that was that their relationship was strained while Harry was married to Ginny and Hermione was married to Ron. So yeah. But thank you very much for reading and for the review! |
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usha88Signed | Chapter : 1 | Date : 06/06/08
Oh wow...that was really great. I have never read a story of HP that takes place in the church. I think it's pretty awesome to combine those two aspects....despite what some other Christians think. Hm...I guess I could really imagine the light because I've seen Notre Dame and Chartres and it's really really pretty. Also, I really enjoy the last word..."sanctuary" There's a nice song that my church always sings. Awesome job. This is one of your better ones! |
Author Feedback: Wow, thank you so much! I'm really glad that you liked it. Yeah, despite what some Christians think, I think that religion and spirituality can combine nicely with the Harry Potter stories. I mean, the entire series is about good triumphing over evil, you know? But I digress. Thank you for the sweet review and for reading! |
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