A great ending to a rollercoaster ride of a story
I liked the last sentence. I kept wondering what the title had to do with the story, and now I know! I actually thought it might have been "cooler" if you wrote the sentence the other way around ("she answered him less than tomorrow") so the last words were "Less Than Tomorrow". Dunno, I guess it would have kinda been like the last words to HP were supposed to be scar. Just kind of cool.
Personally, I don't really care about songs or lyrics in stories (I think I've actually read the lyrics in a songfic once out of who knows how many fics). Sometimes if there's something that involved a paragraph of description and there's an image at the end of the chapter, I'll click on it, but usually I just read the authors notes and ignore any links. That's just me though.
I can't wait for your new story to be ready
