Harry85Signed | Chapter : 23 | Date : 01/09/08
I can't believe it, Draco Malfoy did something right? Considering how you've developed him till now, it comes out of nowhere, because if he really wanted to do the right thing, he had many, many chances before and he blew them all up. |
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Harry85Signed | Chapter : 22 | Date : 01/09/08
I wonder what it is that he has to do, but since it's Draco, I seriously doubt he will do it. At least, I've got to give him credit that he didn't shag her, and managed to get her to say Harry's name, but of course that's only because she had irked him and snapped him out of his lustful mood... |
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Harry85Signed | Chapter : 21 | Date : 01/09/08
I've read the reviews for this chapter and one raised my curiosity, it said that maybe now Hermione will forgive Draco because she knows he has feelings for her. I wonder what's to forgive, what does it change. He still made a mess, just because he's too proud to ask Harry for help when he still could. I don't think she should ever forgive him, there's no reason for ehr to do it. |
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Harry85Signed | Chapter : 21 | Date : 01/09/08
You know, your answers sound a bit as excuses for plot holes you ddin't think about. That said, finally Draco understood Bellatrix's game. It was bloody time, I think even a two years old would have got it long before he did |
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Harry85Signed | Chapter : 20 | Date : 01/09/08
Ah, so now dear ol' Draco gets drunk and tries to rape her, really lovely.
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Harry85Signed | Chapter : 19 | Date : 01/09/08
Ah, the lovely true side of Draco Malfoy finnaly shows!  Seriously though, if he wanted to spare Harry why use Sectumsempra twice on him? A Stunner would have been enough, Harry was wandless after all.
Well, he'll just have to pray night and day that Harry doesn't find them because if he does, Draco is going to suffer a long and painful death, just like Bellatrix, even more so.
Fucking coward... |
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Harry85Signed | Chapter : 18 | Date : 01/09/08
Draco is a fucking coward, he can't do the right thing even when he thinks he's changed...
And of course you couldn't help putting in the Ron moment, uh?  Noit even him would be so stupid to keep thinking Hermione is still is girlfriend when he's been sleeping around for months, and rightly so since they had broken up! |
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Harry85Signed | Chapter : 17 | Date : 01/09/08
Ok, so I'm finally catching up with this story, and I'm glad about the Harry/Hermione encounter, of course, but really, this whole chapter was only trying to push D/Hr forward, you should have detailed the meeting with Harry and their "activities" more, but of course that would have ruined your plan to keep writing about D/Hr...
And I can't believe he threw the owl in the fire, is he a pro Auror or a child throwing a tantrum? I just hope Hermione kicks his ass once she finds out so you better have written about that in the next chapters! |
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GREAT STORY! thank you for writing it and i'm sorry about your friend...
i really enjoyed reading it! looking foward to other great stories! (: |
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SamanthaUnsigned | Chapter : 26 | Date : 27/08/08
I just want you to know that I think this story is fantastic. It's very well written. And I'm glad Draco lived, if only for the fact that Mallory didn't lose her father. I am sort of wondering why he was staying at the Burrow though. All in all, well done. |
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AnonymousUnsigned | Chapter : 20 | Date : 26/08/08
Hmm.. he tried to rape her and she's still "Draco"ing him? weird.. The least she could do is call him Malfoy.. |
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AnonymousUnsigned | Chapter : 26 | Date : 24/08/08
That was the best finishing line ever. So cute! I kept trying to figure out the name and never got it, but now i do! This was a great finish to the story, but I feel so bad for Draco.  Anyways, very well done. I love this story, it was one of the only ones I was able to stick with until it was complete. Best of luck in your future stories, I'll be waiting for them. |
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i hope you have someone to help with the loss of your friend.
any way on the lyrics or images idea; i'd say depends on how germane it is to the plot line. i read one fic where the relation between the image and the chapter was so out there that you need Hubble to see it.
i look forward to your next fic. |
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Yay!! I loved this story it was great!! And I'm glad Draco didn't die!! Keep up the good work in your writing, I look forward to reading some more of your stories!!! |
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AnonymousUnsigned | Chapter : 26 | Date : 23/08/08
what a beautiful story! loved each and every chapter. great stuff! can't wait for your next idea |
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