Nice story. keep it up! I mean for the next story ^^

First of all I'm sorry for your friend

That said, no, sorry but I didn't like the first part of the chapter at all. First of all, Draco lived and that's a big fault in my eyes. Second, Hermione has the audacity to think she did nothing wrong kissing him when he was dying? I'm sure if Harry knew it he would think differently, as he should. Third, she will TREASURE THE MEMORY forever? Is she in love with Harry or with Malfoy? I know you said she loves him in a different way, but sorry if after all the mistakes and what he put them through I don't think she should love him at all! Because of him they all almost died!

For your next story, putting a song which inspired the chap might be nice, also pics and such. Only, I am not sure you'll see me amongst the readers, if it is as angsty as the two stories I read from you, and I expect it to be. I'm sure you won't miss me, given my not really ecstatic reviews, but I want to tell you all the same,

Darn, Malfoy is not dead yet Seriously, I don't care if I sound cruel, I hate him with a passion, and if he dies I won't cry, I promise

At least, if he dies, he will die knowing he got to kiss Hermione, which is by far more than he deserves.

So Hermione finds it strange that Harry is jealous? She went in hiding with Malfoy, the git has access to her room in that castle, and she finds strange that Harry is jealous? Unbelievable!

As for the rest of the chapter, of course Malfoy had to die, so everyone would think of him as a saint, but to me this is only deserved. Had he done the right thing before, and allerted the Aurors about Belaltrix, he might be alive, if he isn't it's only his fault.

I can't believe it, Draco Malfoy did something right? Considering how you've developed him till now, it comes out of nowhere, because if he really wanted to do the right thing, he had many, many chances before and he blew them all up.

I wonder what it is that he has to do, but since it's Draco, I seriously doubt he will do it. At least, I've got to give him credit that he didn't shag her, and managed to get her to say Harry's name, but of course that's only because she had irked him and snapped him out of his lustful mood...

I've read the reviews for this chapter and one raised my curiosity, it said that maybe now Hermione will forgive Draco because she knows he has feelings for her. I wonder what's to forgive, what does it change. He still made a mess, just because he's too proud to ask Harry for help when he still could. I don't think she should ever forgive him, there's no reason for ehr to do it.

You know, your answers sound a bit as excuses for plot holes you ddin't think about. That said, finally Draco understood Bellatrix's game. It was bloody time, I think even a two years old would have got it long before he did

Ah, so now dear ol' Draco gets drunk and tries to rape her, really lovely.

Ah, the lovely true side of Draco Malfoy finnaly shows! Seriously though, if he wanted to spare Harry why use Sectumsempra twice on him? A Stunner would have been enough, Harry was wandless after all.

Well, he'll just have to pray night and day that Harry doesn't find them because if he does, Draco is going to suffer a long and painful death, just like Bellatrix, even more so.

Fucking coward...

Draco is a fucking coward, he can't do the right thing even when he thinks he's changed...

And of course you couldn't help putting in the Ron moment, uh? Noit even him would be so stupid to keep thinking Hermione is still is girlfriend when he's been sleeping around for months, and rightly so since they had broken up!

Ok, so I'm finally catching up with this story, and I'm glad about the Harry/Hermione encounter, of course, but really, this whole chapter was only trying to push D/Hr forward, you should have detailed the meeting with Harry and their "activities" more, but of course that would have ruined your plan to keep writing about D/Hr...

And I can't believe he threw the owl in the fire, is he a pro Auror or a child throwing a tantrum? I just hope Hermione kicks his ass once she finds out so you better have written about that in the next chapters!

GREAT STORY! thank you for writing it and i'm sorry about your friend...

i really enjoyed reading it! looking foward to other great stories! (:

I just want you to know that I think this story is fantastic. It's very well written. And I'm glad Draco lived, if only for the fact that Mallory didn't lose her father. I am sort of wondering why he was staying at the Burrow though. All in all, well done.

Hmm.. he tried to rape her and she's still "Draco"ing him? weird.. The least she could do is call him Malfoy..