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Oh my goodness!
I'm so glad to see a new story by you!
I've always enjoyed your stories and this one definatly takes the cake!
This is probably my fave after Boxes and Crying in the Sun.
Absolutly wonderful to read!
Thank you for writing this one, I can connected to how she feels.. All my seniors left me on Thursday and what are we going to do after we leave this place? was the biggest question on everyone's minds.
Very well written.
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Very cute. I saw that this was about graduation and I had to read it--my last day's tomorrow. I thought you showed the feelings of uncertainty and excitement (all at once) really well. And it's just always fun to see Harry be the mature one.  Congratulations to you for graduation also! |
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OMG I know the feeling I'm graduating today and it is a bit scary but I can't wait. |
Author Feedback: Yeah, it's SUPER scary- but it's going to be AMAZING too! I can't wait. Glad you thought the story covered that!  |
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Very good story, really.
There is just one thing,, At one point, you say that Ron was killed by a couple of rogue death eaters and at other place Hermione says, "What if you and Ron and I never see each other again, or if I can't find a job I like and end up doing horribly", so is Rn dead or not? |
Author Feedback: Ow, shoot, I put the wrong person didn't I? I did- thank you for catching it. It was late when I wrote and posted this- I must have just spaced. I'll change it when I can- this isn't the computer that the file's saved on, and I need the original to edit it. But thank you for the review and for pointing out the mistake- I appreciate it. Glad you enjoyed! |
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AmyUnsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 02/06/08
awwww..I just had my graduation last night followed by an all night party and let me tell you, I feel the same exact way. I'm sad that it's over, and feel completely lost as to what the future will bring because you can't prepare for the unknown. Perfect story to capture that (and gotta love the HHr at the end ) |
Author Feedback: Thanks so much for the sweet review- that's exactly the feeling I wanted to convey, and I'm glad you thought this story did that Yes, I'm scared- (terrified, actually), but I know that whatever's coming is going to be just as good! Be excited- we're on our way out!  |
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hmm... so is harry and hermione already a couple or what? The romance at the end really just came out of nowhere. |
Author Feedback: Yeah, I know the romance came a little out of nowhere- I tried to ease it in, but it just wouldn't budge! still, I felt like it had to be added for the fic to be complete  It was just supposed to show how new, good things can follow the ending of old good things. The end of their school years, the beginning of new good times, and the end of their friendship, the beginning of their romance  |
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gingercatSigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 02/06/08
Cute. Harry being the logical one is really sweet! Glad he took things into his own hands.. |
Author Feedback: Glad you liked it. And Harry sometimes has to take things into his own hands- if he didn't, Hermione would do what I always do and over-think things and then nothing would ever be done lol. Thanks for the review- much appreciated!  |
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Good story, although the romance at the end seemed to come out of nowhere.
One of the things I hated most about DH was the absence of Hogwarts. After being the major thing in their lives for 6 years it's just cast aside. No NEWTS, no graduation ceremony, nothing. It was just so unsatisfactory |
Author Feedback: I know the romancekind of came out of nowhere at the end, but I just felt like it had to be slipped in there- it was the best way I could think of to show how good things come begin from the ending of other good things. The end of their friendship, the beginning of their romance! Perhaps the end of their wonderful school years could lead to the beginning of somethig even better.
And I agree- one of the major disappointments in DH was how little Hogwarts was mentioned. I couldn't believe that the castle that played such and important role in the last 6 books was barely mentioned, when it had served as home to Harry for such a long time! Thanks for the reivew! |
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Harry85Signed | Chapter : 1 | Date : 02/06/08
Nice! I was worring that there wouldn't be any HHr goodness, but in the end you put it there (although, it did seem to come a bit out of the blue... ) |
Author Feedback: Yes, I know the H/Hr seemed to come from totally nowhere, but I just wanted to show how the end of something good (like their friendship) can mean the beginning of something even better (their romance). I'm hoping that's what it'll be like after high school- that things can only go up from here. And the story needed H/Hr! lol. Thanks for the review and the praise- glad you enjoyed! |
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