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gal-texter
Signed | Chapter : 1 | Date : 12/06/08
Hi. Here's a thread that might help http://talk.portkey.org/index.php?showtopic=9571

I saw this issue when I first read this. Haven't re-read yet, so if you've fixed it by now, please ignore this small advice.
 

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gal-texter
Signed | Chapter : 1 | Date : 06/06/08
Just checked the link in my bio - I suppose NAPPA had changed the forums to outline view. You'll have to select Options > Switch to Standard when you read that FAQs thread to see the two other posts with questions.
 

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gal-texter
Signed | Chapter : 1 | Date : 06/06/08
Hi. There is a way to edit chapters without deleting reviews. Hit the link in my fanfic bio or in my forum sig. I've never tried uploading stories, but authors have said there is a way to post edited versions.


 

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gal-texter
Signed | Chapter : 1 | Date : 05/06/08
I love how Hermione got so worried.

Harry still couldn't muster enough anger to kill anyone, huh? Well, that is how he's portrayed in the book.

As much as I like DH, I do think the book should've been trimmed down, esp that long dialogue between H & V about the Elder Wand.

This fic left me hanging at the end, but then your author's note (about the loose ends) and last sentence (about this being only the beginning) warned as much.

FicMod!me spotted a few errors with the punctuation and spelling, but nothing terrible. Just minor things like She was the most beautiful site and a missing comma here and there.
Author Feedback: Hey Gal!

Yeah I know I saw the "site" mistake after I had already posted it but it was too late. I wish there was an edit feature to edit the fics after they have been posted.

I know it is not the best in the world. I've been trying to find a beta reader but I am having the worst luck lol. One person said they wanted to do it but when I emailed her my story she never emailed me back. Another person sent the story back edited to where it looked like it wasn't even mine. I mean I'm talking complete plot changes and everything!

So it is hard to find a beta that really wants to help. I'm still looking though

Thanks for the review Pen!
Manda

hee hee it kind of makes me nervous with you reading my stuff... lol I don't know why though. I'm so silly
 

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cedricslove
Signed | Chapter : 1 | Date : 03/06/08
Awww...that was a really sweet story. I always thought that the book should end differently. The battle was stupid, as if he could've defeated Voldemort that easily. I really enjoyed this =)
Author Feedback: Well sweet was one of my goals! So thankyou so much for the review. I really do appreciate them.

Manda
 

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Harry85
Signed | Chapter : 1 | Date : 01/06/08
Nice one shot, i loved it, although there's the matter of Hermione kissing Ron before Harry's trip into the forest that is not explained here, that's the biggest loose end I can see, but apart for that's it's really good.
Author Feedback: Yeah I remember about the kiss and the whole Ron and Ginny thing when I wrote it. I just thought that when someone goes that close to dieing perhaps that petty junk didn't matter anymore.

In my mind Harry didn't give a shit about the feelings of Ron or Ginny. He saw her after such a terrible ordeal and he knew he loved her and that was what mattered at that time.

I'm sure there will be tons of "talks" and "jealousy" between the 4 of them after the war settles down.

Not to mention I hated that stupid kiss between R/Hr. I mean it was stupidly done in my opinion. They were in the middle of a battle and just because Ron says something about the house elves she gives him a big ole smacker? yeah whatever

I think a first kiss should be about the emotional connection. I hope I did that here between Harry and Hermione.

Thanks for reviewing,
Manda
 

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SHOULDBEHHR
Signed | Chapter : 1 | Date : 01/06/08
I liked this story, short and sweet. Defeats the bad guy, gets the girl, as we all know it should be! Nice job.
Author Feedback: Yep, it might not be easy but in my mind Harry should get the girl that stood by him for so many years.

It only seems right. Thanks for reviewing.
Manda
 

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dysfunctionalspirit
Signed | Chapter : 1 | Date : 31/05/08
EXACTLY how the 7th book should've went!! great job.. would definitely love to see more if this muse hits you again
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dysfunctionalspirit
Author Feedback: I was really pleased with how this story came out. I love it when I don't have to debate with myself about how a story should go or be written and this one just absolutely flew out of me. I can't even explain it.

I am hoping that the muse for this story plot line will strike again. I do feel an amazing tug toward it but I make no promises lol. If it does happen again I hope it won't disappoint you.

Thanks for reviewing and I'm glad you liked it.
Manda
 

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kimmypotter
Signed | Chapter : 1 | Date : 31/05/08
great job! this was such a cute story! i cant wait to read the rest of your stories!keepup the great work on them!
Author Feedback: Well, I hope my other stories don't fail to entertain you then

Thanks so much for the review. It is appreciated very much.

Manda
 

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papermask
Signed | Chapter : 1 | Date : 31/05/08
Aww, this was sweet. A much better ending than the one Rowling provided us with (no offense to her, or anything). Well done.
Author Feedback: thanks so much for the compliment and I'm really glad you liked it.

thanks for reviewing. They are all appreciated. A writer always likes to know what others think of their work so thankyou.

Manda
 

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Coregond
Signed | Chapter : 1 | Date : 31/05/08
I like it! I prefer this ending, honestly, because the J.K.'s wasn't even a fight. Yours was, partially.

Keep on rocking!

- Coregond
Author Feedback: I found the final battle a bit lacking myself. Hope you enjoyed this as much as I did writing it.
 

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Hana-xoxo
Signed | Chapter : 1 | Date : 31/05/08
That was a absolutely lovely piece! Thanks for writing! It held tons of emotion in it and it was extremely powerful! It's beautiful how you wrote it!

The last sentence was absolutely heart renderingly touching! And very Harmony! It was a great story and I absolutely loved it! The death scene was written very well! And this is sooo much better than the kind of ant-climatic one of JKR's! Great job!

xoxo
Hana
Author Feedback: wow I'm so glad you enjoyed it. Thankyou so much for the kind words.
 

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