Just like the first story, this is very good. I am able to feel the emotions from all of them. You have a very good skill in being able to bring out how the characters are feeling and what they "think" they need. I liked this story very much.

Time to move onto the next one.

*snicker* Gah, she's definitely getting worse about her obsession with him. If I were in Harry's position, I think I'd try to severely limit all future contact with Ginny, it's just not healthy or safe. 'Sides, he's already got magnificence in Hermione, he doesn't need a "ginger snap" to attempt to do something for him.

Are you going to take this any further? This was excellent - Ginny's self-deception is absolute, and sick. Where could it lead her? What might she do?
Well written indeed.

From your review reply I thought you changed the scene? Or maybe I *did* read the changed version but still thought it was a little odd - "unadulterated hatred"? Either way - I just re-read it and this time around I fully appreciated how clueless you made Ginny... very entertaining

IMHO = in my honest opinion. Ah, the side effects of growing up in the internet generation...

Typoes, heh couldn't resist.
"the confines of my room—but *her* doesn't so much as bat an eyelash"
"so why *eddoes* he go off gallivanting with that bloody, manipulative tart?!"
"his voice *utters* as he utters the word."

A nice sequel, but IMHO not as Harmonific as the first. I still enjoyed reading it, but it seems the H/Hr interaction is a little weird... they're married and Hermione kind of just assumes that Harry is messing around with Ginny. Huh? It turned out fine in the end, though; apart from the oddness of the situation you put them in, the interaction was fun to read. And you kept up the fate aspect pretty well...

i saw a few mistakes... it didn't seem to be anything TOO major, but all in all... not too bad.
I love the way you write it, are you going to be writing more? I can't wait if you are
keep it up
-megz-
p.s. here are the mistakes i found... if you want to fix them:
"-but her doesn't so much..." (it's at the begning of the story) the 'her' should be a 'he'

"...that as soon a is should ..." (it's closer to the end) 'as soon as i should'

Kismet

harry hermione kismet more like it

anywayz i love it u have a talent for writing your really talented

I think Ginny need to get over herself quick. I mean come they've been married for 4 years. I think its cute how Hermione punished him. lol. I'm still laughing about that. I don't feel pity for Ginny, she should know better than to flirt with a married man. Keep Writing.

Having Hermione hit him with "Are you in love with her?" after just seeing Ginny snuggle up to Harry a little abrupt. I mean they've been married to each other for a while now, right? Unless it's something they've been fighting about since they got married, it's kind of out of left field. Doesn't Hermione have more faith in her husband than that? Not that I wouldn't be pissed at my husband too for not knocking the cow to the floor when she tried to put her hands on him, but it wouldn't be enough to make me question my husband's commitment to me. I suppose you needed that, though, so Harry could profess his love and devotion to his wife and poor Ginny-Sue would have to hear the truth. Talk about delusional.

Loved this piece, absolutely loved it. Goes perfectly with the first part... Haha, the way you make Ginny appear in this piece... it's comedy... If the actual story would have turned out the way we all hoped it would, I can definitely imagine Ginny doing this.

Ah, Ginny is her usual delusional self... It's amazing how she can twist anything in her mind to see it as her being fated to be with Harry

Ginny is under some major denile and I truly think the girl should consider professional help. I hope you do another story or two because I honestly want to see what it\'s going to take for the girl to finally get it Harry only wants his wife Hermione.

Heehee, that Ginny. Geez. You know, I think you could go further with this - if you wanted to. But then again, I have a need to make Ginny see that she's NOT the one for Harry, Hermione is, and that could be the driving force behind me wanting you to continue this. Whether you choose to continue it or not, this was a very good sequel to a very good story. Congrats!

Ugh! Figures Ginny would ruin the Harmony of this piece! I wish that Hermione wasn't so miffed about that - Harry was telling her the truth! Anyway - nice sequel. Still hate Ginny with a passion!

I would really like to see what will happen between Ginny and Hermione if they start a argument because of this. Is there going to be a sequel, or is this the last one-shot of kismet???