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Way cool, I'll count this as an early Christmas present. Okay I was wrong about the Polyjuice, nice surprise using Ted and the apology was nice too.
I am confused as to why having a wand core as part of the briefcase handle wouldn't be detected as a wand. It would seem simpler plot wise just to have a Undetectable Extention Charm concealed in the briefcase. As a practical matter much more useful, but it is your story.
It was good to get back to Harry's problem even though the Zabini sub-plot is fascinating. Can't wait to see how that ends. One would suspect that a person smart as Blaise would have most contingencies covered.
The bedroom scene was well done. You've outdone yourself this time.
Thanks again and update as soon as you can, please. |
Author Feedback: You raise a good point. It seemed to me that, though an Extension Charm might let you pack tons of stuff into your bag, it would still be there to be detected. I.e., in Book 7, Hermione's handbag wouldn't have let her smuggle banned items into the Ministry or Gringotts, if there were spells in place to detect those items. But in the books, Hagrid seems to be able to use his umbrella (with his old wand fragments imbedded) without anyone noticing... and the guard at the Ministry is very careful to weigh Harry's wand, but didn't care about anything else. I came to the conclusion that the sensor spells were looking for wands by their *shape*, not by their cores. Maybe the idea that something besides wands could have a wand core is too radical for most wizards... they do seem a very conservative bunch.
Zabini *is* trying to cover all his bases, but he's up against the cleverest person of their generation. I know who I'd put *my* money on.
Thanks very much indeed for the review. Have a good holiday! |
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awwwww... how cute! that was a nice scene when they were laughing together because it showed how much influence Hermione has on Harry. She's the only person who really knows him and you do a fantastic job making that stand out. keep up the great work! :] |
Author Feedback: Thank you so much! Yes, I'll try to do my best, and hope it pleases. Have a good holiday. |
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izzieqSigned | Chapter : 21 | Date : 16/12/08
Interesting developments. What exactly is Ginny up to? Anyway, I guess things are progressng between Harry and Hermione. She appears to be getting a little more daring. Poor Harry is so confused and with the Hallows sapping his emotions, he should be ready to implode.
On to Hermione's question about Harry's activities while gone. I think it would be totally unrealistic if Harry had never been with anyone. Regardless if he was hiding out, he was still a guy with needs. Come one, I would find it totally bizarre if Harry was totally innocent here. Besides, if Harry has to think of Hermione with Ron, then Hermione should know that Harry has had other partners. It balances out the dynamic and makes it interesting. Hermione would have to come to terms with that. I mean she married Ron for goodness sakes. Why should Harry be denied some pleasure during his years away. He was in hiding from the wizarding world, but was he in seclusion from the muggle one as well? He had a job didn't he? I am sure that in all those years he would have found someone he was remotely attracted to especially with him thinking that this was the totality of his life with the Hallows. So, while many want Harry to have pined away for Hermione and have never touched another....I don't think it's fair to have Hermione married with a kid and Harry some pure innocent wasting away. Gives Hermione way too much knowledge and power over Harry...I like it when it is more even. |
Author Feedback: Thanks for the thoughtful review! Yes, what *is* little Ginny up to? Well, she could simply be doing something nice for her sister-in-law's birthday, after said sister-in-law put her up for a few days and went out of her way to reassure her that she's not liable to be Obliviated. Right? (I don't seem to be convincing anyone...)
As for Hermione's question about Harry's activities, she's curious, sure, but ultimately, it's none of her business. And she *knows* that, but this is Hermione. She's gotta know everything about Harry... and this topic has a special interest for her, for obvious reasons. Next chapter should be enlightening. Hope to see you there! |
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AnonymousUnsigned | Chapter : 21 | Date : 16/12/08
hey great chapter, please try and update sooner, i love this story |
Author Feedback: I'll do my best, but you know how busy the holidays are... |
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tard_288Signed | Chapter : 21 | Date : 16/12/08
Hmm, the spice cake... Hmmm, from her 'secret' stash.. hmmm.. I think I smell something and it is not good. Is Ginny poisoning Hermione? Another theory that was rolling around in my head is that the cake allows Ginny access to Hermione's room at night. In the previous chapter you mentioned Ginny noticing that the charm was only there during the night. She is going to be in for a surprise with Harry being there and the fact that he can't sleep.. I hope Harry zaps her a good one. Maybe grow her a tale and turn into one bat boogey.  She is planning something. Guess we will have to wait until the next chapter to see what. She will definitely make her move when Hermione is asleep....
The pumpkin thing was soo awesome. I would have never guessed that you were referring to Hagrid's giant pumpkins. A wand core hidden away in the handle of the briefcase. I actually went back and re-read the last chapter to notice Teddy carefully not touching the handle when he picked up the briefcase. Very well done.
So that mysterious double was Teddy Lupin. I am glad that you have brought them back into the story. I truly love your version of Tori Weasley.
Very nice scene at the end with Harry actually sleeping in Hermione's bed. A horizontal hug??  I was wondering why you mentioned that Hermione put on 'only' her pajamas. Good for Harry. And jealous Hermione once again shows up by 'asking' if Harry has slept with anyone else. I don't think he has since he has been hiding for all of these years. Will Hermione get zapped if her hands 'accidently' wander a little south?? Can't wait for the next chapter!!! |
Author Feedback: Whew, so many theories! I wish I could confirm (or deny) them, but that would take the fun out of the story, wouldn't it? I will say that Ginny has no access to Hermione's bedroom at night, once the Imperturbable Charm (not to mention Colloportus) is set on the door.
Ah, thank you for noticing how careful Ted was with the briefcase handle. Yes, it had a wand core built into it -- very sneaky lawyer, Lovinett. And I'm glad you like Ted and Tori... I'm tempted to write a series of one-shots just for them.
As for Hermione and her "horizontal hug"  , the consequences of trying to cheat on her marriage vows could be dire. Her own magic will try to prevent that. And the most obvious way to do so would be to render her frigid and Harry impotent. Ouch and double ouch. But as long as their hands don't wander *too* far afield, they're safe. Frustrated, but safe.
Thanks very much for taking the time to review each chapter! I do appreciate it. |
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tard_288Signed | Chapter : 20 | Date : 16/12/08
Yes, two chapters for me to read!!! Another great chapter and the mystery thickens. You have managed to pose more questions and it seems like Hermione has figured something about although I don't know what it is. Big Pumpkins??? Was that Polyjuiced Hermione popping back into the office? Hmm... The only other two people who know of Harry are Teddy and Tori. Could be Teddy I guess since he is a shapeshifter but I am not sure if Hermione would involve a teenager in something so dangerous.
Darn that Ginny!!! That means she is planning on something.  She cooked Hermione breakfast and Harry said that he was not paying attention to what she was doing last night. Did she slip her some of the potion they are using to poison Kingsley?? Grr... She neeeds to be shot!!! 
Harry really does need to tell Hermione that he can't sleep anymore. Can't be a good thing if the Hallows are doing that to him. I have one more chapter to read. One of the advantages to needing to catch up. |
Author Feedback: Yay, two reviews for me to reply to! Thank you for that.
The clue about the big pumpkins is from canon, not the story itself, so think back to the first time we see really big pumpkins in the books. And no, it wasn't Polyjuice: Polyjuice takes a month to prepare, remember, and requisitioning it from the Ministry might have attracted Zabini's attention.
Ginny, planning something? MMMMMMMMMMMaybe. But to assume that Ginny's so cold-hearted that she'd poison her former best friend (not to mention her own sister-in-law).... well, that would be an Evil Ginny Indeed.
As you know by now, Harry does indeed tell Hermione that he can't sleep, and her reaction is pretty much what we'd expect. |
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Harry85Signed | Chapter : 21 | Date : 15/12/08
MMh, so Ginny was only planning a birthday party? What's that to do with Hermione's bedroom and the Imperturbable charm being ther eonly at night?
Anyway, I am curious to see how they will get rid of the Hallows, and how they manage to accuse Zabini... |
Author Feedback: Yes, a birthday party looks pretty innocent, after all that mistrust we had for Ginny... eh? Why was she checking Hermione's bedroom? Er, didn't I mention that?
Answers will be forthcoming, but I will say that the confrontation with Zabini will be dramatic. At least I hope so. As before, thanks for the review. |
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BexisSigned | Chapter : 21 | Date : 15/12/08
I suppose if Hermione passed through death somehow, that might dissolve those marriage bonds. |
Author Feedback: Yes, but killing Hermione to dissolve her marriage is rather cutting off one's nose to spite one's face, isn't it? Even the Hallows wouldn't help here: as stated, the Resurrection Stone brings back the dead, it doesn't bring the dead to life. The best Harry'd have would be a shade of Hermione, like the second brother in the Tale of Three Brothers... and that doesn't seem to have ended well. No, the Master of the Hallows will have to find another way. |
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Awww... what a sweet end to the chapter. I'll be interested to see how much they can get away with or how you paint them out of the corner of Hermione's marriage vows. I liked Rose and Tori discovering Hermione and Harry at Hogwarts. I didn't expect the fake to be Teddy; nice going with that. |
Author Feedback: Well, as to how much they can "get away with": the vows only affect what they do, not what they feel. So they can be very much in love -- assuming Harry Finally Gets A Clue, which it looks like he has -- and can probably do quite a bit, as long as there's no sex involved. Frustrating, yes, but good stories are built on angst.
Glad I could fake you out with Teddy. He and Tori are simply too good to not use. Thank you again for reviewing. |
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Jo BobSigned | Chapter : 21 | Date : 15/12/08
I really enjoyed your disclaimer for this chapter. Pardon me of you've used it before, but I just happened to catch it this time. Very nice! The story continues to move forward and I'm liking the pacing. I like how you've kept so many options open as to how the Hallows will be destroyed or removed from the picture. It's keeping a sense of mystery in the story that I'm enjoying. The Harry/Hermione relationship is also moving along, and I'm quite curious about how you'll resolve it! I don't exactly know what's going to happen and I'm excited to see where the story goes. Very nice work on this chapter and I can't wait to read the next update.
Regards
Jo Bob |
Author Feedback: I try to make every disclaimer different... this was the first time I used this one. Hee! I enjoyed it, and I'm glad you did, too.
The story is moving towards its resolution -- bearing in mind that all the plot lines have to converge at the same time, which is kind of like cooking a meal: everything has to simmer until ready. As to how I'll resolve Harry and Hermione's dilemma... well, I'm sure I'll think of something.
Thanks for the complimentary review, and I hope to see you soon. Take care. |
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Very good update, it's great to see the plotlines coming together. It was especially gratifying to see Teddy and Hermione make amends.
Looking forward to more. |
Author Feedback: Well, I think it was something Hermione really had to do. She was bringing the habits of her workplace into her private life, and that never ends well. Ted deserved better... and she now acknowledges that. He, for his part, was big enough to accept the apology. (With a little pressure from Tori, of course. )
The plotlines will continue to converge, so stay tuned. Thanks for the kind words. |
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Aw...cute! Finally, some action...with a lot more to come...in all regards! YAY! I really do like this story...it's quite addicting... |
Author Feedback: Oooh, addicting! Never been called that before...
Yes, there will be more action -- in all regards -- very shortly. I hope you enjoy it -- and thanks for being here! |
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Ah, you do torture us so...
Kinda surprised that Ginny didn't drug the cake, honestly. Unless she did and we just don't know about it yet. Umm... yeah, wandering a bit here.
Anyways, it was nice to see the younger generation again, if only for a bit. The girls stealing the Map was good as well. |
Author Feedback: Torture? *Moi*? And here I thought you'd really appreciate this chapter...
Ginny drugging the cake, hmmmmm... not sayin'. And the younger generation has one more cameo appearance to make, at the very end of this story.
Thanks for reviewing, my lady! |
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CallieUnsigned | Chapter : 21 | Date : 14/12/08
*sigh* What a lovely ending. Can't wait for the next chapter.  |
Author Feedback: Awww, thanks. The next chapter is, as they say, In Progress. Hope to have it out by New Year's. |
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BB RuthSigned | Chapter : 21 | Date : 14/12/08
Sorry i haven't reviewed in a while. I kind of fell off the intellectual wagon a few chapters back - proof that my brain isn't as sharp as this fic requires
I did enjoy it; I still enjoy the HHr parts and the quest to get rid of the Hallows and will follow that piece. I just am waiting for Harry to get a clue ! A woman invites you to share her bed and snuggles up with you...I can only hope that nothing is wrong with him except for maybe the fact that the Hallows have affected more than his sleeping patterns  |
Author Feedback: I don't think I'll be giving anything away to say that, very soon now, The Clue Will Be Gotten.
As for the rest of the story, it all comes to a head at the International Conference, so stay with us until then. And welcome back. |
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