Nice last chapter, it would have been funny if Ron walked in on them when they were cuddling though.

Hi there, just popped in to say that this is just another one of your brill stories that seem to follow the path that JKR strayed from. Excellent piece of work, thanks.
I often wonder if JKR actually wrote the last book, I mean even the HBP seemed to be written more for the film makers than the readers, and then DH was there to confirm the movie mens involvment.
It seems in the end JKR failed, I mean if a Girl/Woman gave up her future, left her dreams behind to follow a guy into certain danger, if she had so much loyalty that she did not leave him when given the chance then what she felt for him just had to be way beyond friendship.
Shame JKR seemed to forget that, and the simple nature of the spieces, a Woman would not chose some one who was so obviously far beneath her in inteligence, all you need to do to see this small fact of nature is to look around you, lawyers marry lawyers Drs marry Drs etc, So there rant finished.

yeah, you always provide us with such fantastic storys! it`s unbelievable!
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but tell me, now i am really curious, which book are you quoting?

Firstly, thank you for your kind reply.
Maybe because the old-fashioned way I was raised. To say the Words first is terribly embarrassing and decrease your own value. How you feel for a man, you don't say the Words until he says to you. That's what I was taught, although modern girls don't realize it anymore. So please forgive my offense.

Besides, according to the Book 6, HE showed HIS feeling and said the words to the red-haired first, didn't HE?

May I recommend, if HE in your stories can't say the word first, how about SHE asking some questions, for examples, 'What do you think about me?' or 'What do you feel about me?'

Just a comment, not a critic. You write what you'd like, I'll read nevertheless.

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Wonderful ending as always.
By the way, is there any chance in your next story that HE would say the Words first? You've always have HER say it first almost every time, which, according to me, it was like HE loves HER less than SHE does HIM.
Just a comment, always like your stories.

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this story is so lovely! so stirring and stimulating! ahahaha.. you always surprise us with your story. It's amazing and impressive on how you come up with such ideas..



bring on the angst!!!

Every time I read something by you, I'm surprised. It's just, you keep writing these brilliant things and I keep thinking that your next can't be as good as all your others, if only because it'll seem repetative or old, especially in the case of smut.... but that isn't the case at all. Somehow, you manage to make each fic, no matter how long or short it is, unique in it's own way. They all have your style, of course, but they're all different... and all amazing.
So thanks for not giving up on writting so many great things, even though, as you correctly stated, JKR doesn't know her own canon.

Oh My, that was....SIZZLING! Hot just doesn't seem to be the word to describe it. I LOVED the emotion between the two of them. I was blown away. This was just wonderful and definitely worth the wait.

Yeah I agree with you about JKR I don't know how she messed up on that one, but one thing what happened to Ron in the story...? But great story until your next story good writing.

What a great little story. It had the perfect mix of emotion and smut. I could feel the pain and the passion. You are a truly talented writer.

That was so hot, my god and it was great.
You are right sometimes angst is good

Nice

Ahh!!! That was so adorable I just love reading happy endings and of course, I always love ALL your stories...

Love your stories, this one damn near made my monitor melt.

It only fully hit me the other day, but I think Hermione is the most under used and under appreciated character in the whole series. We don't know what her parents real names are, we have no idea where she lives, what her house looks like. We know so little about her and she's the main female character! It pisses me off how JKR can simply throw away Hermione's character like that. Anyway, love your stories, keep writing them!

That was great.Thank you for this story and the time and effort that you have put in to it.Please ignore any and all flames.Enjoy your self when you write and have fun in your life when you can.

So many insecurities... so many misunderstandings... so much shyness... and so much left unsaid. So much that doesn't even need to be said... but could be conveyed with but a look... one honest look at one another... and all would be said without a word being spoken.