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meh. i am glad there's another chapter that i can read right way. i do hope the next one doesn't end as crappy as this one |
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AnonymousUnsigned | Chapter : 3 | Date : 16/07/08
i absolutely love it keep up the good work awesome stuff |
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AnonymousUnsigned | Chapter : 2 | Date : 09/07/08
Excellent as well... You have kept me curious! Need more! Keep up the great work! |
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AnonymousUnsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 09/07/08
Awesome chapter! Loved it! Very well written! Can\'t wait to read the next chapter! |
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RinnbakuSigned | Chapter : 3 | Date : 05/07/08
That's gotta be one of the best lemons I've ever read! Most authors focus on the physical descriptions, you know? I've always preferred when it goes more into the feelings than just a "play-by-play" mixed with vulgar words...
Just so you know, I read the warning, and still hated you for chapter 2... I think that it just impacts the reader more when you write the characters and their emotions as well as you did... Definitely going in the favorites!
TTFN
Rinn ^_^ |
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MionefanSigned | Chapter : 3 | Date : 30/06/08
Yes! This is now my all time favourite smut chapter! I can't believe the intensity you've written into this one. |
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vlbuehleSigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 29/06/08
Well, you did warn us about the angst, and a happy ending has been promised. But this was really angsty! Poor Hermione! And it's a relief to know Harry won't be as stupid as he seems, or as he was in canon--he was fairly stupid in canon, wasn't he? I liked that this was all from Hermione's point of view, and her concern for him over the events at Godric's Hollow was great. Half of me feels sorry for her in this chapter, and half of me thinks she's being an idiot. Looking forward to the rest! |
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AnonymousUnsigned | Chapter : 2 | Date : 28/06/08
Poor Hermione! Poor Harry! Funny, how they love each other and pretend they just friends to themselves! |
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AnonymousUnsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 28/06/08
Sad but I still like it. It seems as a great story! |
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hermioneUnsigned | Chapter : 3 | Date : 28/06/08
 oooh..how i love happy endings..esp when it's a hhr ending!  i hated the crappy dH epilogue...and am happy for any good or smut hhr fic! |
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hey!! loved the angst in the first two chapters!! GREAT STORY!! i really enjoy reading all your stories! thanks for writing! =) |
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alls what i can say is da*( that was awesome!!!!!! Harry and hermione are sooo darn cute!!!!!!!!!!!! YOUR WRITING IS AMAZING, KEEP WRITING!!!!!!!!!!!!! |
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lvswthtSigned | Chapter : 3 | Date : 27/06/08
This was great and you're so right about even Ron assuming there was more thatn friendship between Harry and Hermione. How JKR thought he was perfect for Hermione, I'll never know. |
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lalihUnsigned | Chapter : 3 | Date : 27/06/08
i must say this was short, unimaginably sweet and in all senses beautiful. there are only a handful of authors on PK that makes me feel as though i am there eyewitnessing the fic, and you Bingblot, are of those authors.your ability to describe is beyond measure. i swear it was like i was with them the whole time,in your mind, and this is how wholesom you write. no joke when harry and hermione admitted their feelings to each other in the room, my stomach dopped, thats how much your writting affects me. all of your work is fantastic. please dont ever stop writting. |
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prof RozUnsigned | Chapter : 3 | Date : 26/06/08
Thank-you for this wonderful chapter. You are an artist when it comes to the written word. I find your descriptions are incredible, and your writings take me to wherever the characters are. I don't think I can say in words how much your writing affects me. I enjoy all of your stories, and they make up for the writings of another author that we know of. Thank-you, thank-you, thank-you! Keep writing! I love it! |
Author Feedback: Oh, wow, thank you so much for your wonderfully flattering review! It means a lot to me to know how much you like my writing. |
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