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Awwww... poor Harry - I don't blame him for being confused.... and poor Hermione to think that someone couldn't want her that way and to hide herself away from getting hurt. Great job.

That was perfect!! Your writing is beautiful. If you're with someone who truly loves you, it can really be like that every time! Amazing story!

Oh that was almost cruel. I do hope the next chapter provides some kind of catharsis, or better, a happy ending! Hee hee

ooh, I like it. I like them together, but I like the "strain" in the relationship. Going to next chapter! :-)

Great story, but you shouldn't call JK an idiot. It's her story, not ours. She only invited us into her world, and we should respect her decisions.

much better ending. yay, happiness. so what was the book?

meh. i am glad there's another chapter that i can read right way. i do hope the next one doesn't end as crappy as this one

i absolutely love it keep up the good work awesome stuff

Excellent as well... You have kept me curious! Need more! Keep up the great work!

Awesome chapter! Loved it! Very well written! Can\'t wait to read the next chapter!

That's gotta be one of the best lemons I've ever read! Most authors focus on the physical descriptions, you know? I've always preferred when it goes more into the feelings than just a "play-by-play" mixed with vulgar words...

Just so you know, I read the warning, and still hated you for chapter 2... I think that it just impacts the reader more when you write the characters and their emotions as well as you did... Definitely going in the favorites!

TTFN
Rinn ^_^

Yes! This is now my all time favourite smut chapter! I can't believe the intensity you've written into this one.

Well, you did warn us about the angst, and a happy ending has been promised. But this was really angsty! Poor Hermione! And it's a relief to know Harry won't be as stupid as he seems, or as he was in canon--he was fairly stupid in canon, wasn't he? I liked that this was all from Hermione's point of view, and her concern for him over the events at Godric's Hollow was great. Half of me feels sorry for her in this chapter, and half of me thinks she's being an idiot. Looking forward to the rest!

Poor Hermione! Poor Harry! Funny, how they love each other and pretend they just friends to themselves!