ok, I am going to wager that you are going explain more as the story goes on because I can't even begin to relay how confused I am right now.

interesting, I'm guessing that Harry's parents are still alive? I'm curious to see where this goes.

ok lil confused here. so harry had a one nighter with this addy. which was the cause of the fall out of harry and ron. hmm then find out the malfoy is actually married to her. then she was already seeing malfoy then, at the same time slept with haryy and was with ron, and was going to marry him. wow. that is one busy girl. so will we get a flashback. plz explain a lil bit next update. i like it just dont get the missing person thingy. keep it up.

I suppose Harry's one night stand with Addy produced a kid, which had something to do with her leaving Ron at the altar, and that she wasn't really a Muggle. (Btw, I hope Hermione has had a few one night stands as well.)

And a child is thrown into the mix...Harry's?- I'm just guessing. I can see the Hr/H slowly evolving, and the idea with Lily was a bit far-fetched.

I suppose Malfoy's lowered concern for his own son is over the fact that the boy is not his...again just guessing (i suppose i will just have to stop doing this)

I wonder why addy left Ron at the alter?

I have a feeling that this whole thing is a set up and that the kid is his! why else would he only care about her and not the boy?Please don't let lily and snape get together. I know its your story but come on!update soon

I knew Harry's one night stand with the girl would create tension between him and Ron, but how she ended marrying Malfoy I really can't see. And what's with Addy leaving Ron at the altar?

Also, I have to agree with Harry that having Lily and Severus be too friendly is disturbing. I hope nothing will come from that because i'm not sure I can read it.

By the way, I think the way you brought back Lily was a bit farfetched, but hey, it's the Wizarding World, so i'll feign it is perfectly normal (but seriously, it IS farfetched even for the WW )

wow!! I wonder what's the story about Abby. I get that Ron did date her and almost got married to her but was it Harry's fault. Did she say she couldnt. Or did Harry object. Hope to find out more of this reality. Keep Writing.

Ok, let me guess...four years back into the future Addie returns with a child? - That would certainly rock the trio's relationships.

If that does indeed happen then I don't know if I could continue...maybe its just my incessant love for all Harmoninan children? I don't know!

Anyway, enough of my assumptions- I could be very well wrong. I can't wait to see what happens, and how this turns H/Hr

Sorry, I forgot to add this to my chap alert list,

Mmh, I can already tell I won't like this Harry you're portraying. One night stands are not him, even if you did say this was OOC, I always cringe when I read of him having one night stands. Plus, he did with the girl Ron likes so that might create trouble between them...

It was generally well written, however I probably won't be following it further. Though he may not be a saint, I doubt Harry would ever willingly chose to sleep with a girl his best friend fancied. Such an act of quasi-betrayal is counter to his entire character as we've come to know him. It's low and devious and I just can't believe he'd do it; consequently, I just can't buy into any story that would butcher his character like that. Sorry.

However, good luck with this.

Interesting opening - surely a one-night stand with a girl Ron fancies can only lead to trouble right? I can imagine Hermione's reaction to this and the consequences of a night four years prior. Anyway, I am curious to see where you are going with this...so please update soon.

this was intriging (yeah i spelled it wrong oh welll.) i look forward to reading more and seeing how i makes out to be harry and hermione

I feel this has great potential, really hope to read more soon. A few mistakes here n there like \'jack\' instead of jacket and a phrase that didnt make total sense when u talk about cheap beer, but the rest is brilliant. Im guessing there are more one night stands I liked Addison, but i dont suppose we\'ll be seeing her again?
Neway, keep it up!