This story had the potential of being a very good story, but the more I read the more I found myself hating the way you portrayed the characters. You\'ve no grasp, whatsoever, on Ginny nor Harry\'s characters, nor Draco\'s.

The fact that you portrayed Ginny as a selfish, horrible mother to her sons is simply unbelievable. She\'s noble, and she\'s strong, and she would never turn her back on her sons no matter who their father was.

Harry is -not- the simpering moron that you made him out to be, and if you\'ve read the last book as I suspect you have, than you most certainly would know that.

Hate to see such an interesting plot go right down the drain.

i don't usually read ginny/ draco fics but i love this one great job with it!1
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Aww, I loved that. That was such a cute ending to your story. And if it wasn't the ending, I'm sorry I said that and I hope to see more of future chapters. Great job with this!

Oh my goodness. It was the best one piece and I loved it. I was so caught up into the whole affair and loved how Draco kept on Ginny and reiterating the offer to be a family. I cant wait to read more. Hopefully you will write about the love from Ginny's point of view.

Oh how I adore a happy ending! This was very lovely.

omg i loved this fic so much!!!!!!! thank you for giving me hope that d/g can live on even after the dhepilogue!

This was a very sad fic - even sadder that Harry had no idea of Ginny's betrayal. I don't think that the fic quite warranted an NC17 rating, either. It was a worthy effort, though I personally thought that Lily's reaction was too weird - especially since Harry has raised her this entire time.

I'm all for Ginny and Draco, but NOT at the expense of Harry and James and Albus.

What a Bitch Ginny is and she has a clone in Lily....What a Horrible mother she was to her Boys!! No matter who the father is she is still their Mother.....

Too bad she made it on the train