Nice chap, I chuckled at the boys competition in the dorm. And Neville, he surprised everyone!

A beautiful update. There's nothing harder to write than a good piece of smut, but you manage admirably. Great depiction of teenage male sexual insecurities. Thanks for presenting Neville the way you do - I'm not sure Ginny deserves a guy like him, and I don't mean the inches! His granny is a formidable charcter, to say the least, and firmly rooted in 19th century. No wonder Neville is the shy insecure guy we have all come to like so much.
Can't wait for chapter three! How about upping the rating?

Just me editing my previous review. I meant that Luna is brilliant for one so blatantly HONEST not obvious. lol Anyway Good job

hahahahahahahaha!!!! This is so hilarious!!! A trouser snake? Well well well, Malfoy is much more creative then we give him credit for! I had to laugh at hermione's reaction hehehehehe and Luna really does have a brilliant mind for one who is so blatantly obvious good job will be hanging around for the next chapter!!

very creatively written that flashback is!! bravo!! i'm glad you've updated!!

very creatively written that flashback is!! bravo!! i'm glad you've updated!!

OMG!!!! That was hilarious!!! I fell from my chair laughing!!. You really have a go with words!!!and can we say that this chapter is all about manly proud . I love this fic as much I love Their Way. Excellent as always I can hardly wait for the next chapter.
Nita

This was GREAT!
I liked how you made Luna a little manipulative, but still herself - and the whole premise of the story is, of course, hilarious! I laughed out loud at several points keep it up! (a pun? who knows...)

That was too naughty! I loved every word - leave it up to the Griffyndor boys to "measure up" - but to make Neville the grand champion, that was way too much!! Is there to be more details as to the goings on in the prefects bathroom? Will Ron get loony over Luna in the RoR? Please update soon!
Another fantastic chapter!!!

Hahah, I really liked the first two chapters of this story. Whether it was the comedy of Luna's feigned innocence, the rainy-day activities of teenage boys, or how I felt I could perfectly relate to everything in this chapter (ah, the joys of being a teenage boy...), some aspect of your writing made this story... just enjoyable. It's not something I'd read for adventure, or for good fluff, or for some intense Voldemort plot -- it's one of those stories I might re-read just for the fun of reading it. Thanks and looking forward to the final chapter... and the events in it. LOL.

omg hysterical!!!! absolutely amazing! good old loony =) how does one come up with these things?? lovely writing

omg hysterical!!!! absolutely amazing! good old loony =) how does one come up with these things?? lovely writing

Wonderful! Perfectly Luna and hilarious! One of the best fics I've read in years! I SOOOOOOOO want to read the next part! You portray Luna's innocence excellently, and it really captures that sexual innocence that comes between child and adulthood. I would love to see Harry and Hermione deal with Luna's visions . . . have you ever thought of writing Luna/Ron? I'd love to see her exploration of their relationship, dealt with in the same light style. That sense of discovery you evoke is just great and so rare. Go with it!!!

lol you should make the jump to NC-17 judging by your already very descriptive language, you'd do a great job and it be hawt as well. Keep up the awesome story.

Oh, my God.

You are brilliant. There are...no other words. Just brilliance :-)