liamtohaSigned | Chapter : 3 | Date : 19/07/08
That was quite nice. I enjoyed that. 
You should think about writing more. |
Author Feedback: I'm glad you enjoyed it. I do have another one that I'm working on, and I plan to throw chapter one up this Friday. I hope you like it also.
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Haha. Very cute. Just a really well done, feel-good story.
I especially enjoyed the bit about the auras-- very cute.
Nice job! |
Author Feedback: Hey VipyGirl831,
Thanks for the wonderful review. It is always great when someone whos work I've enjoyed likes my story. That makes the review is all the more special. I'm glad you liked the Luna aura part, I had fun writing it..
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I've recommended this [URL=http://talk.portkey.org/index.php?showtopic=27799]here[/URL] using my test account. Authors are welcome to post alternate story URLs in the rec thread (the "Link to Discussion Forum").
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Author Feedback: Gal Texter,
I am truely honored that you put my story up as a recommended fic. It is greatly appreciated. You have gone out of your way to be heplful as I learned the ins and outs here at Portkey with this, my first story. I'm very glad you enjoyed it . Thank you most sincerely.
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Hana-xoxoSigned | Chapter : 3 | Date : 23/06/08
Oh gosh! I was going to reply to your lovely reply way sooner!!! But then I forgot *slaps self*
That was honestly one of the most nicest replies I've gotten! The compliments were wow! But it is true honestly I was absolutely hooked by this story the elements were combined so well! And everything I said you deserve it because it really iss a fantastic story that entertains your reader! The plot is absolutely ingenious! Love it. Really? I got it? Well wow LOL!  Yup that scene by the lake was great! And some of those lines were just AMAZING 'I think I'm having a hormonal breakdown' OH GOD! I busted out laughing soo hard! And the Ron!PolyjuicedHarry! convo was absolutely PRICELESS! Again everything meshed so well. My heart was aching at parts and laughing out my guts in the other. The characters have depth and realism to them. Well if I was a motivation to you I'm glad too but really again it was an amazing story and your writing is fantastic! Again SUPERB SUPERB!
xoxo
Hana |
Author Feedback: Hey Hana,
You know, you write GREAT reviews! Again, I am pleased that you truly enjoyed my story. I had a blast writing it and getting so many reviews is phenominal, and yours stood out among them. Thank you so much for taking the time to let me know that you enjoyed what I wrote.
ShouldbeHHR |
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Hi there, I was re-organizing our Writing forums a bit. Here's one that might help you: http://talk.portkey.org/index.php?showtopic=9571, because it's the issue I had noticed when I first read this story. Perhaps you've fixed it by now. |
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Ha, ha, nice way to end it. I specially like whne hermione throws herself at harry, really hot kiss. Keep writing please!!   |
Author Feedback: I'm happy you liked it. Thank you for taling the time to review all 3 chapters. I appreciate it. I am writing now and should have something up pretty soon.Again, I'm glad you enjoyed my story and thank you for coming back. |
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Wow, I must say this ranks up there in my top portkey favorites. Well written, comical, witty, and charming all wrapped up into one awesome story! Keep up the good stuff!
Thanks again for the awesome story! |
Author Feedback: Thank you very much. That's an awsome review you left me. I am very glad you liked my story. This is a great site and if my story is near the top of your list, I'm honored. Thanks for reading. |
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Prof RozUnsigned | Chapter : 3 | Date : 02/06/08
Great little story, I really enjoyed it. I loved all of the little one-liners you put in. I wish you had put the talk in between Harry and Hermione. I know that the mushy stuff and soul bearing can be hard, but the readers love it. I felt that without it, the ending seemed a bit rushed. Think about it for next time, and I will be adding you to my list of \'writers to read.\' Keep up the good work! |
Author Feedback: I'm glad you enjoyed it I loved writing this story. It kind of wrote itselt right up until THAT scene. The mushy stuff and soul bearing isn't easy to do well. It is my first story so I learned a lot while writing it and reviews help .You're adding me to your 'writers to read' list? I'm extremely flattered and thank you. |
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Cute story but I think the title should be Polyjuice Day. |
Author Feedback: Thanks, I'm glad you liked the story and I must have changed the name at least 3 times, at one point it was called flip tab! Don't ask. . |
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*claps* Oh, that was a good read! A great way to spend a few minutes. 
Great job, esp. with the characterizations! Lavender the gossipy roomie (but could be caring and was certainly right on about the eyes thing); Luna converting Ronald to Nargles and aura talk; Harry the clueless boy; Hermione mortified at Polyjuice Day.
Oh btw, this reminded me of an old thread:
http://talk.portkey.org/index.php?showtopic=7885
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Author Feedback: Gal-Texter
I'm honored. You once told me you don't read stories but you didn't just read it, you reviewed all 3 chapters, and very specifically and kindly. Thank you for taking the time and for the very nice reviews. I am thrilled that you enjoyed it.
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*clutching tummy while rolling on the floor laughing*
Ooh, I loved Luna's appearance and her explanation about auras!  As well as Hermione's aura turning to blue-green and her threat to make Ron\'s a dark red!
Plenty of giggle-worthy moments.
Harry frowned and thought, “Hey, think up your own bloody excuse… that one was taken!"
LOL!
Ron was doing ... actually, he was doing what he always did; he was heading to the kitchen to get something to eat.
True!
Hermione sat in the common room, trying to formulate a plan of revenge—or, erm, reasonable course of action.
Yeah, right.
Oh yeah, I forgot to comment about how Harry noticed that polyjuiced Lavender had a different shade of eyes than the real Hermione. That was such a WAFF-y moment!  (WAFF = Warm and Fuzzy Feelings). |
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Well, I saw that this had only three chapters, so I figured I could read it quickly. Heeheehee, very good start in here. I kept snickering.
You did great in writing the dialogue -- the spoken and inner thoughts. Everyone's talking just like they do in the books. The Trio, Malfoy, even Snape.
Good idea with Colin cropping Ron out of his pics, intentionally or not. It does sound like something Colin might do.
Ron's jealousy is playing out nicely here; not forced at all. What was that he said here, just because Harry couldn't see it (the obvious bond between him and Hermione) doesn't mean it isn't there.
I liked plenty of humorous lines, esp these ones:
“Hey, how did we go from 'we' to 'you' so fast?” He asked.
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Ron was busy eating his weight in pancakes.
Plus of course the subtle references to Hermione's ... er, borrowed endowments.
Now I wonder what Ron could be up to? *clicks Review and Jump to Next* |
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Harry85Signed | Chapter : 3 | Date : 01/06/08
Well, it was a nice last chapter, although I would have preferred you put in the chat between Harry and Hermione instead of the last part you wrote |
Author Feedback: Thanks for reviewing not only this chapter but the others as well. You weren't the only on to make that comment about the H/Hr talk. Next time I will probably be more specific in places such as that. This is my first story so, I'll live and learn. I do appreciate the feedback. Thanks again! |
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usha88Signed | Chapter : 3 | Date : 01/06/08
That was a great story. Very cute. Though I am a little disappointed that we didn't get to see them discuss to each other about what happened. The ending was cute. I liked the idea of Ron saying something about Luna and his auras combining to be orange. |
Author Feedback: I'm glad you liked my story. I really liked her standing behind him at the pitch overhearing him argue with himself about what he should do. I didn't write what they said because I didn't know what to have them say. i've read a lot of stories and I didn't want to be to sappy.This was my first time really writing anything, next time I plan to be more discriptive. Thanks for the kind review, I appreciate it. |
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usha88Signed | Chapter : 2 | Date : 01/06/08
Well this was cute. I really like that you have the inner voice and then their voice. I do think that it might've been more helpful if you could've put the inner voice in italics to make more of a distinction though. It got a little confusing sometimes.
I like how you have Dumbledore alive in this story! Awesome. |
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