TootsieSigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 18/05/08
you had me scared for a second there in the beginning. but it was very humorous and cute at the end. gret job. |
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lol it was a funny story, though the Weasleys must have been very high to do that  And I loved the way he realized he was in love with Hermione and how he left her breathless  Great story! And Luna rocks! |
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Era LupusSigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 17/05/08
omgosh omgosh omgosh!!! i luv it! if this story is not a one-shot i pray that you update soon, please!
ps. and also please update The Tent, i need to know what happens next! |
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AphyUnsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 17/05/08
I loved it. It had me laughing throughout the whole thing. I think this definitely deserves a sequel if you have the time!
Awesome piece. Great job. |
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Harry85Signed | Chapter : 1 | Date : 17/05/08
Well, this was funny, how all the Weasleys rounded on them to make them see the truth, I never saw a fic in which that happened, usually Ginny and ron would be ecstatic at the idea of being together forever with Harry and Hermione, still that part was a bit long.
You could have had a longer HHr part at the end, I think, to balance out how Harry and Hermione kept screaming they were in love with Ginny and Ron. |
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usha88Signed | Chapter : 1 | Date : 17/05/08
Well that is quite interesting. Great job at that. I definitely see some OOC and over the top stuff. It was quite funny though. |
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Thank you for this wonderful story. I love Harry & Hermione together they just fit perfectly.. |
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Wow, that was indeed great! You really made me laugh at all that chaos and the part when they finally realize they're in love with each other is really well written. Keep writing like this! |
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AnonymousUnsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 17/05/08
How odd.... I did like this. Gave my quite a chuckle,actually |
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I think I read more humor than fluff, but that's perfectly fine
There are alot of lines worthy of being quoted but I have to say that the line about Azkaban was pretty damn hilarious.
You're one of my favorite authors and I hope you return with The Tent soon!
Viopathartic |
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SummerUnsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 16/05/08
hehe...i liked ron when he said, "Lalala, i'm not listening." hehehe!!! i nearly fell over on my chair. i could totally see him doing that.
i like this. it was a different perspective...one that i hadn't read before. thumbs up! |
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AnonymousUnsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 16/05/08
“Mate, trust me. I have a sister. If I ever was as touchy-feely, caring, or all-knowing with Ginny as you are with Hermione, the Aurors would be dragging me to Azkaban for incest.”
Best line ever.
You actually made me like the Weasleys in this.  Too bad JKR never gave them this much depth. |
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 hehehe.. that was what SHOULD have happened.. LMAO so over the top yet so perfect since they were being soooo draft.. LOL
ramble on
dysfunctionalspirit |
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AnonymousUnsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 16/05/08
you reffered to a blast ended skrewt as an imaginary animal, did you read the books hagrid had them in there care of magical creatures class in goblet of fire |
Author Feedback: YES OMG I'm Sorry!!!
Definitely meant Crumple Horned Snorcack, my bad! Gotta beat up my proofer too
I'll fix it up in an update lickety split. |
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aw. it was a bit, uhm, whacky at first. lol. but cute. merci! |
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