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Tootsie
Signed | Chapter : 1 | Date : 18/05/08
you had me scared for a second there in the beginning. but it was very humorous and cute at the end. gret job.
 

Ravenclaw's heir
Signed | Chapter : 1 | Date : 17/05/08
lol it was a funny story, though the Weasleys must have been very high to do that And I loved the way he realized he was in love with Hermione and how he left her breathless Great story! And Luna rocks!
 

Era Lupus
Signed | Chapter : 1 | Date : 17/05/08
omgosh omgosh omgosh!!! i luv it! if this story is not a one-shot i pray that you update soon, please!

ps. and also please update The Tent, i need to know what happens next!
 

Aphy
Unsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 17/05/08
I loved it. It had me laughing throughout the whole thing. I think this definitely deserves a sequel if you have the time!

Awesome piece. Great job.
 

Harry85
Signed | Chapter : 1 | Date : 17/05/08
Well, this was funny, how all the Weasleys rounded on them to make them see the truth, I never saw a fic in which that happened, usually Ginny and ron would be ecstatic at the idea of being together forever with Harry and Hermione, still that part was a bit long.

You could have had a longer HHr part at the end, I think, to balance out how Harry and Hermione kept screaming they were in love with Ginny and Ron.
 

usha88
Signed | Chapter : 1 | Date : 17/05/08
Well that is quite interesting. Great job at that. I definitely see some OOC and over the top stuff. It was quite funny though.
 

vfharrypotter
Unsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 17/05/08
Thank you for this wonderful story. I love Harry & Hermione together they just fit perfectly..
 

hplove_dgch
Signed | Chapter : 1 | Date : 17/05/08
Wow, that was indeed great! You really made me laugh at all that chaos and the part when they finally realize they're in love with each other is really well written. Keep writing like this!
 

Anonymous
Unsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 17/05/08
How odd.... I did like this. Gave my quite a chuckle,actually
 

Viopathartic
Signed | Chapter : 1 | Date : 16/05/08
I think I read more humor than fluff, but that's perfectly fine

There are alot of lines worthy of being quoted but I have to say that the line about Azkaban was pretty damn hilarious.

You're one of my favorite authors and I hope you return with The Tent soon!

Viopathartic
 

Summer
Unsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 16/05/08
hehe...i liked ron when he said, "Lalala, i'm not listening." hehehe!!! i nearly fell over on my chair. i could totally see him doing that.

i like this. it was a different perspective...one that i hadn't read before. thumbs up!
 

Anonymous
Unsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 16/05/08
“Mate, trust me. I have a sister. If I ever was as touchy-feely, caring, or all-knowing with Ginny as you are with Hermione, the Aurors would be dragging me to Azkaban for incest.”


Best line ever.

You actually made me like the Weasleys in this. Too bad JKR never gave them this much depth.
 

dysfunctionalspirit
Signed | Chapter : 1 | Date : 16/05/08
hehehe.. that was what SHOULD have happened.. LMAO so over the top yet so perfect since they were being soooo draft.. LOL
ramble on
dysfunctionalspirit
 

Anonymous
Unsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 16/05/08
you reffered to a blast ended skrewt as an imaginary animal, did you read the books hagrid had them in there care of magical creatures class in goblet of fire
Author Feedback: YES OMG I'm Sorry!!!

Definitely meant Crumple Horned Snorcack, my bad! Gotta beat up my proofer too

I'll fix it up in an update lickety split.
 

MyUsedRomance
Signed | Chapter : 1 | Date : 16/05/08
aw. it was a bit, uhm, whacky at first. lol. but cute. merci!
 

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