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Mike
Signed | Chapter : 1 | Date : 16/05/08
Thanks so much for this really fun one-shot. I really enjoyed it! I always really liked Dobby! The saucy Hermione was fun too.
 

MyUsedRomance
Signed | Chapter : 1 | Date : 16/05/08
oh. that was extreemly good. i loved it. but of course, i like anything of yours.
would it be too much to ask for a sequel to these randy teenagers?
 

Unicornzvi
Signed | Chapter : 1 | Date : 16/05/08
Very nice story, i really liked the way you had Harry and Hermionie realize how the other felt for each other. Your presentation of dobby was very well done although I had a problem with Minerva/Snape. While I can picture Minerva as a Dom and Snape as a Sub I'm having difficulty picturing them together.

The Unicorn
 

brentdax
Signed | Chapter : 1 | Date : 16/05/08
Amusing and sweet. Well done.

(And I'd leave it at that, but Portkey won't let me...)
 

apachep
Unsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 16/05/08
LMAO here! Too cute. I love Dolby the delusional house elf. The thoughts of 'Gladiator's' libray sex scene popped in my head.
 

nitoskasaint
Signed | Chapter : 1 | Date : 16/05/08
This was completely hilarious, man you excelled yourself, excellent one shot, so difficult find this days thanks for sharing.
 

harrynmione4ever
Signed | Chapter : 1 | Date : 16/05/08
This was very sweet and well written. It was a bit scary, too (all that Mistress Kitty Cat and Professor Bat -- yikes!).

I hope you'll update Muggle Summer soon too -- I can't wait for that!
 

usha88
Signed | Chapter : 1 | Date : 16/05/08
That was really cute. Very interesting. Great job at that. I never thought about overlapping dots. Intereting idea. I did not need to think about Mcgognall and Snape doing stuff in the Room of Requirement though...
 

Anonymous
Unsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 16/05/08
lmao she-who-must-not-knit omg i love that..kept me laughing through the whole story lol
 

Mionefan
Signed | Chapter : 1 | Date : 16/05/08
Oh, very well done. This is one of your better ones.
 

KillerQueen
Signed | Chapter : 1 | Date : 16/05/08
Thanks for that awesome one-shot! It gave me a good laugh right before I head off to the Land of Nod! OMG - my brain hurts from the image of Kitty-Cat and Batman! yikes! Fantastic story, great Harmony, and lots of hilarity! Bring on some more stories!!
 

fenriswolf
Signed | Chapter : 1 | Date : 16/05/08
Very clever, though I thought Hermione was still 'She Who Knits' at this point in the story. Sounds like the DA is going to have a harder time scheduling meetings in the Room of Requirement than expected, and that Harry is likely to be scarred for life checking the map to see which of the staff is using it at any given time....well done, and certainly worthy of a few more spin-offs; Ron and Luna, Neville and Susan (and/or Hannah!), Padma and Parvati and Gred and Forge, the possibilities are endless....oooh, great mind-scarring moments! Hermione uses the map to check up on Dobby and Winky as she's concerned about the house-elves' living conditions, and discovers a vast sea of after-hours overlapping elves; little buggers have to burn off that excess energy somehow, and it would explain why they're normally so cheerful all the time....hope to see more fun one-shots along this line!
 

slickrcbd
Signed | Chapter : 1 | Date : 16/05/08
Well, that was a fun little jaunt. Too bad Hermione had to be a spoilsport with the bathing suite. I really don't have much else to say about it.




Stupid portkey points system making me try to come up with more stuff to say than necessary. I'd have normally just limited it to the first sentance followed by "nice job".
 

Anonymous
Unsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 16/05/08
Yay! This is really cute. One thing though.

"Hey, I resemble that remark!"

"You certainly do," Hermione replied. She chose not to tell him that he resembled it in more ways than one.

You can't use "resemble" that way. I think you mean "resent". Anyway, nice work!
 

wrockmomma
Signed | Chapter : 1 | Date : 16/05/08
That was so cute I love it now I have to go read the story that inspired this little interlude!
 

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