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sparky40sw
Signed | Chapter : 1 | Date : 02/01/09
too much fun here - somehow this version of Dobby is just as obsessed with things turning out as they should for Harry - and a lot more effective than the canon version was.

thanks
 

Kage66
Signed | Chapter : 1 | Date : 30/12/08
I think you made me addicted.

Addicted to you're stories.

Not that I don't like yours at FFN, because I do as well. But here you got a certain flair not really welcome "there".

more!
 

silverbullet
Signed | Chapter : 1 | Date : 21/07/08
Ha. I loved this.

Finding new quick one shots that are really well written, funny and sweet is hard when you've been everywhere looking for H/Hr stories.
 

CrazyBeans
Signed | Chapter : 1 | Date : 19/07/08
lol! i loved hermione's answer at the end. i think it's a great story. keep up the good work! :]
 

Rinnbaku
Signed | Chapter : 1 | Date : 04/07/08
Your one-shots always seem to end with a remarkably witty, incredibly dirty comment from one of our favorite couple's mouths... I rather like it. On a side note, I've never been able to imagine Hermione getting embarrassed about nudity. I always see either Ron, Harry, or both gaping in wonder, and then she sighs in exasperation. "Honestly, boys, they're just breasts!! Close your mouth, Ron, before you catch a fly."

TTFN
Rinn ^_^
 

Cateagle
Signed | Chapter : 1 | Date : 02/07/08
*wicked chuckle* Dobby as matchmaker? I do have to wonder at his suspicious timing and placement. On the other hand, I do agree with Harry that the information about what certain folk get up to in the RoR is most definitely TMI. However it happened, Dobby's manipulations or just plain dumb luck, 'tis good to see thses two get together so thoroughly and passionately. Here's hoping they don't get really carried away and break a Library table.
 

sparky40sw
Signed | Chapter : 1 | Date : 20/06/08
that was lots of fun - loved the way you used the image from the map as a leitmotif thru out.
does Hermione move the towel back out of the bath before she needs it to dry off?
 

dennisud
Signed | Chapter : 1 | Date : 16/06/08
Thanks for a great one-shot that made my day!

Please make more or expand tis one!

dennisud
 

Anonymous
Unsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 29/05/08
Hey, this was a fantastic story. Please write another chapter as soon as possible. Thanks!

Magorian
 

daybreakbliss
Signed | Chapter : 1 | Date : 25/05/08
The Mistress Kitty-Cat and Professor BatMan bit - I almost died laughing!
 

gphoenix51
Signed | Chapter : 1 | Date : 19/05/08
Short, sweet and lots of fluff. My kind of story, Excellent job. Can't wait for the ending of Wizard Gone Wild
 

Cedriclover22
Signed | Chapter : 1 | Date : 19/05/08
it is a good story. and is funny at some parts. i think it is good.
 

Desireader
Signed | Chapter : 1 | Date : 18/05/08
OOO, that was a great funny story! You should write more like them!!
 

siriushhrfan.leelee
Signed | Chapter : 1 | Date : 18/05/08
This was a absolute wonderful story. I adored the ending, and the conversations between the two, and the come-and-go room incident between Minerva and Snape.

You did a wonderful job lovely
 

Harry85
Signed | Chapter : 1 | Date : 17/05/08
Really nice one, although I could have done without the McGonagall/Snape part
 

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