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Crying Over Onions

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TheAlphaMale
Signed | Chapter : 1 | Date : 31/05/08
A very clever one shot. It was humorous and creative that makes so much sense when you read it it's ingenious. My Mom always said, the stronger the aroma in an onion the better the onion is so they must have had a great one. Nice job!
 

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gal-texter
Signed | Chapter : 1 | Date : 25/05/08
Heehee, that was a nice fluffy piece.

*clicks the Review and Jump to Next button*

Ah, I see we still have that 10-word minimum in place. If you ever get curious about that minimum, feel free to ask me for the thread.
 

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lucke13
Signed | Chapter : 1 | Date : 18/05/08
This was really cute! I loved it and how they got together because of onions.
 

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PJ
Signed | Chapter : 1 | Date : 13/05/08
That was adorable snoopy. I liked it very much. It is nice to see more ficlets based on books 1 to 5 that ignore the last 2 books.


PJ
 

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grandmaster
Signed | Chapter : 1 | Date : 13/05/08
In life too you meet the one for you in very strange situations. Liked your story.
 

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KillerQueen
Signed | Chapter : 1 | Date : 12/05/08
And what adorable fluff that was! Nice little story - interesting premise and lots of Harmony! What more can I ask for? Anyway, looking forward to more of your fics!
 

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Harry85
Signed | Chapter : 1 | Date : 11/05/08
Well, it was nice, well written..but I have a smal problem with it, I think you could have done without the "Harry reading into the other people's eyes" thing.
Author Feedback: Well Honestly I thought so too after I had written it but was being lazy and didn't want to rewrite parts of it

I don't really know where that part came from but it popped out.

My only excuse is that I REALLY like a powerful Harry
Thanks for reviewing
 

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usha88
Signed | Chapter : 1 | Date : 11/05/08
This was cute. I liked it. Very interesting. I wouldn't think they they would get together over onions...cute idea.
Author Feedback: Well I'm glad you enjoyed it.

thanks for reviewing
 

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the_scribbler
Signed | Chapter : 1 | Date : 10/05/08
Great story! I loved the fact that it was cutting onions that made Hermione cry...and yet - it was so much more. A great plot device that I'd not have ever thought of!

Thank you for writing this! It made my afternoon


Regards,

the_scribbler
Author Feedback: Yes, I thought it was a very sweet challenge.

Here is the link to the challengers post. I can't take credit for the idea of crying over onions

http://talk.portkey.org/index.php?showtopic=23558&st=0

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dysfunctionalspirit
Signed | Chapter : 1 | Date : 10/05/08
hehehe cute.. great job now that'd be a good reason to go cut some onions.
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dysfunctionalspirit
Author Feedback: Thanks so much

I'm trying to get into the habit of replying to peoples reviews. so thanks

Manda
 

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kimmypotter
Signed | Chapter : 1 | Date : 10/05/08
awe great job! i cant wait to read the rest of your stories! keep up the great work on them!they are fantastic!
Author Feedback: Thanks!

If you read them then please review. I love to read what people have to say.

 

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Viopathartic
Signed | Chapter : 1 | Date : 10/05/08
that was adorable! Especially when he put his arms around her. And Ron's line at the end was perfect
Author Feedback: Yes I like that part as well. I love it when Harry Huggles Hermione

Thanks for reviewing!
 

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