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Defining Harry

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Anonymous
Unsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 23/05/08
hey, u should write the defining Harry essay and post it just for fun
 

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Hermione's Shadow
Signed | Chapter : 1 | Date : 21/05/08
That was really cute. The only thing that seemed a bit out of character was Harry's initial reaction to Hermione's request. Anyway, great story!
 

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lucke13
Signed | Chapter : 1 | Date : 18/05/08
This was a really cute fic. I liked how you wrote that their friendship just drifted (as it tends to do in life) and how they could always come back to each other in the end.
 

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Anonymous
Unsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 14/05/08
This story definately requires a chapter writing to explain why Hermione had not seen him or contacted him for years in a country where you could travel from one end to the other and stop for dinner on the way and still do it in a lot less than twelve hours. If I had a friend who was only away at uni then I would expect very regular contact both personel visits and by post or phone.
Oh and I would love to know which uni she went to for so many years and yet still had as you Professor said many more years to go. here in UK we dont stay in school till almost middle age as the Americans seem to do.
Author Feedback: Ah it's my old friend anonymous again. Maybe if you read the story, rather than just skiming and then leaving a nasty review, you would know why they hadn't seen each other in ages. I'm well aware of how small England is, I not only have family there but I've also been there myself and driven all over it.I know it would fit inside the state of Victoria where I live... IN AUSTRALIA! Now... how much can you tell me about Australia? Do you know which end of the country Melbourne is in? Do you realise that Australia is actually part of the Great Brittish Empire and not one of the United States of America that you seem most determined for me to be from? My profile says very clearly that I'm Australian.

If you had any friends at all in highschool then perhaps you might understand better how they can drift in later life when their careers & etc go in different directions. Grow up and get over yourself. Or write your own stories and let me know so I can leave you nasty nitpicky reviews. You seem to really hate my work so here's another suggestion... stop reading it?
 

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bryana1029
Signed | Chapter : 1 | Date : 13/05/08
That was a really good story. I wasn't really sure where you were going with it at first but it ended up being great! Thanks for the wonderful entertainment. =)
 

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Churros are Good
Signed | Chapter : 1 | Date : 12/05/08
Nicely done. A very cute one shot, and well thought out. Good work, keep it up.
 

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Tank03
Signed | Chapter : 1 | Date : 12/05/08
That was a nice one-shot. It really brightened up the day.

Thanks for sharing.
 

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KillerQueen
Signed | Chapter : 1 | Date : 12/05/08
Cute little one-shot! I only wish there were more confession of feelings there...but it was a lovely read! Looking forward to more Oxford Undercover!
 

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Anonymous
Unsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 11/05/08
Cute story,nice real cute.
Harry was so nice to Hermione about her class that she is takeing.
I like it.
I love short story's.
this was fun to read.
Hope to read more of your story's.
So please keep up the excellent work.
But till then so long.
Tha tha tha tha tha tha tha tha tha that's all folks!
 

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Harry85
Signed | Chapter : 1 | Date : 11/05/08
Really nice one shot, I loved it it was sweet and well written.
 

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usha88
Signed | Chapter : 1 | Date : 11/05/08
That was a really cute story. I am glad that Hermione chose to define Harry like that. It would be interesting to see what she would've wrote. Well, very lovely anyways.
 

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Korval
Signed | Chapter : 1 | Date : 11/05/08
Howdy!

A cute little story and an enjoyable read.

Not at all where I thought you were going... Thought you would have Harry read Hermione's essay and deduce that she had feeling for him.

Went looking at your other stories & realized you had another of my favorites (unfinished) - Accidentally Married. Would be nice to see more of this...

Thanks for sharing - Korval
 

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floomehere!
Signed | Chapter : 1 | Date : 10/05/08
this kind of just put my thoughts about Harry into a story

nice job.
Author Feedback: I guess that's what I was trying to do here. I'm glad you liked it. Thanks for the review.
 

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Amdorn
Signed | Chapter : 1 | Date : 10/05/08
I'd love to read that essay . . . any chance that you have it written? Or that you might write it?

Thanks!
Author Feedback: I haven't written the essay. I thought about it but wasn't sure if I should or not. If I ever do, I'll be sure to post it as a second chapter to this story.
 

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kimmypotter
Signed | Chapter : 1 | Date : 10/05/08
great job!keep up the great work on your stories i cant wait to read the rest of them!
Author Feedback: Well I hope my other stories don't dissapoint. I'm glad you liked this one and thanks for the review.
 

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