its so sad they cant find the words. i love this chap tho. its really good ginny pov

wow, i love this story. it can cause trouble but love will never end!

aggggggh sounds well interesting lol cant wait to see where this is gona go

im gona read on now lol

i like it so far and i think you should keep going, i\'d love to see where this goes!

I liked this chapter. You got more into the emotions of the characters, and that really helps my appreciation of it.

Not to worry, this chapter was much easier for me to read, and I'm still curious to find out what is actually going to happen in this story.

what happened to Harry, you should have some h/hr on the side, maybe a cameo or two and mentions, i know this is a D/g story but at least Harry needs to be mentioned and you cant mention him without Hermione

"he had bullied her but he was more on auto pilot at that point"

I liked this. It was a nice touch!

Well, it was interesting, but I think perhaps you could have fleshed it out a bit more. It's fine to give back story, but it would have been nice to see some conversation. It started to feel too much like a summary, and as a story you want it to feel like a narrative rather then just reading a synopsis. Do you know what I mean?

In any case I think you have a story here that has a lot of potential. My suggestion would be not to worry about length. Your chapters are quite short to what most people are used to, and you shouldn't be afraid of giving more detail or having it longer. Try to give a bit more conversation between characters, or even go a bit more into their thoughts (even if your intention is just to give back story), and you're bound to make it that little bit more captivating. I feel like I can't relate to the characters because all I am getting is the narrator voice.

I hope you don't see this as me being horrible, because that was not my intention. I think you have a lot going for you, but I think you can definitly give more.

Well this is an amazingly short prologue, and I'll admit that I don't particularly fancy stories where Draco and Ginny are already together, but I'm willing to give this a chance.