aahhh my kind of ending!good fic...despite the unfortunate death of their kid.. but do write more smut next time..how i adore it!

Well finally! I still think Ginny should have died at the hands of Harry, ha. That would've shown her not to mess with him!! Anyway, great story! Nicely done!

Nice Ending.
Ginny whent to jail for life.
Harry and Hermione got a new home.
I love this story it's was fun and sad to read.
I am looking forword to your next story.
But till then so long.
Tha tha tha tha tha tha tha tha that's all folks!

This isn't meant to be a flame, but it is critical. My intention isn't to offend, but to be honest.

I read in one of your A/N's that you were interested in improving your writing ability, and it is in that spirit that I leave this review.

I didn't read this story. In fact I read very few of your stories. I start them, but I can never finish them because I always find them lacking and not entertaining. You've had some quite interesting plot ideas but the execution always left me disappointed.

I think the biggest hang up is that you usually "tell" rather than "show". For example; a character walks into a room and you clearly tell us that this person is upset and why. It would be far more interesting to read if we were able to suss out the character's emotional state from their behavior and actions. If you "showed" us they were upset rather than "telling" us. Doing so draws the audience deeper into the story and contributes to more refined character development. Your stories/characters always seem to come off one dimensionally to me, rather than multi-faceted. They seem like carefully arranged lists of facts rather than explorations of characters and plots.

I'm not trying to be harsh, just honest. In fact I do think you have talent, that's why I'm taking the time to share my thoughts. If I thought you were complete rubbish I wouldn't bother. I do love the H/Hr fandom and I do thank you for so actively supporting it. I just think that, with your native talent, you could do so much better.

echo echo hmmm this was a short but odd fic very very dark... ta ta for now

oh that is so messed up, and what movie is this based off of?

How ironic would it be if Hermione became pregnant that night?

Talk about stupidity; Ginny knows that they'll use Veritaserum, and that Harry has full memories of her attempting to kill his son, and she still pleads innocent? I'm actually surprised she didn't try the insanity plea. It would have at least made some sense, and might have stood up in court. Ah well, justice was served.

I'm also a little astonished that Harry and Hermione can stand to live in that house. Three attempts were made on their children's lives, and about the same number of propositions for adultery, within it.

Anyway, I loved it. Excellent story, as usual. can't wait to see what you've got next!

Harry is actually out thinking Hermoine! That doesn\'t happen too often.

Oh snap. What a turn of events. Wasn't expecting that... Brilliant writing, as ever, Harry85. This story is really great, and I enjoy reading it. It warms my heart to see that you have updated a new chapter, or new stories. lol... awesome chapter.

Whew, Thank God! she was caught, for a moment I really thought you were really gonna let her kill all the kids. Good story.

LOL OWNED. nice. from the summary I thought there would be more angst, but I guess it's over?

O wow wow wow that was some thing.
Harry you rock.
Ginny will get to go jail for life with the kiss from Dameors.
But what will Hermione say to all of this ?
What about Ginny's mom and Dad waht do they think about all of this ?
But till then to the next chapter so long then.
Tha tha tha tha tha tha tha tha tha that's all folks! Good night and good luck.

um, why don't harry and hermione sleep in the same bed

Yes, i glad that she was caught. This is a great story

wrong move ginny. haha the bitch is going down. will they show that her wand performed the cutting charm. proving also she killed their daughter. i hope they give her the kiss of death. will we get a glimpse of the weasleys? im glad that mark did accidental magic, and lessen his brothers fall. couldnt take after alex was murdered. well justice will be served but it will not bring back their daughter. so sad that the only girl died. well keep it up. so now that this is almost done. whats the next one. im thinking it should have some humor, well alot. cause read too much betrayal. still love it...