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Great chapter. I can't wait to read more of this story! I hope you'll be posting more chapters soon. I love Harry using a tickling charm to wake Hermione up in the morning .... that was precious! Good work! |
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def something i'd like to continue reading to see how you take it. a thing that bothered me though was thefact that Harry called it soccer. it's football for them. |
Author Feedback: hehe.. oops.. he was trying to remember what the sport was called hence the ah.. beforehand. Also when I was writing that moment in my mind he was thinking about the local quidditch legue and nearly said so then at the last second had to think of another sport to substitute! I should have gone with Cricket, I actually know about that at least, with soccer (sorry) football I am completely ignorant. |
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ColieM13Signed | Chapter : 3 | Date : 12/05/08
I like this story and hope you update soon.
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Oh poor Hermione, she's going to be exposed! And she better tell Harry her feelings cuz I'm sure that Hayley would jump at any oportunity to be with him  Until next chapter! |
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Tank03Signed | Chapter : 3 | Date : 12/05/08
There is something a tiny bit OOC about Harry and Hermione here, but I can't exactly put my finger on it. Whatever it is, it doesn't detract from enjoying the story and I'm quite eager to read more. I can't wait to see how Hermione responds to have Harry tail her all day.
Thanks for sharing. |
Author Feedback: I think the OOCness stems from the fact that they find each other attractive and aren't having brotherly/sisterly feelings towards each other  Lets face it that's OOC these days! LOL! I'm glad you're enjoying it anyway. Thanks for the review. |
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Thanks for the update - Hermione in lycra and Harry's reaction was classic. I know it's a slow build to the confession of feelings, but can I just say that I can't wait for it? Keep up the great work and please update soon! |
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SearcySigned | Chapter : 3 | Date : 12/05/08
Well that is a fine kettle of fish isn't it. I hope that Hermione is honest and lets Harry know how she feels sooner rather than later. As usual you've done a masterful job. Can't wait for the next installment. |
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Harry85Signed | Chapter : 3 | Date : 12/05/08
Well, I think Hermione's answer to Hayley should be quite obvious, given her thoughts while Harry was cooking breakfast...  Problem is how to keep Harry away from that particular conversation... |
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OH my goodness that was a very interesting chapter love how they told Hermoine about her outfit and sort of why Harry ran for the shower. Giggles. |
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ScoutSigned | Chapter : 3 | Date : 12/05/08
Oh, what a great story. I can't wait til Hermione and Hayley have that conversation!
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Enjoying this and the other story. I was writing something about HHR and I based it in Oxford as well. Google maps is a wonderful thing, I had them running on the paths around Oxford
Uni, and had an excellent visual to set it up, got them an apt, the works..here's a link to illustrate
http://maps.google.com/?mid=1210558237 Oxford Uni is down to the left , The Dragon school is up to the right, Radcliffe Hospital clinic is almost straight south (that's where I have Hermione doing her internship) In any event, I am enjoying your story thus far. TimW |
Author Feedback: Thanks a lot for that link! I'd already been to the oxford website but it didn't really come together till I saw the satelite maps etc. I've decided that Hermione goes to The Queens College, being so close to the high st I thought it fitted perfectly with Harry saying he had a hotel room around the corner. Not only that but it's website claims it has one of the best libraries in Brittain, which I thought would be important to her, it offers the course I've got her doing, and its website claims it's the only college in oxford housed completely in Baroque era buildings, which I though Hermione would feel very at home in after Hogwarts. Not only that but it's symbol is three red birds (my husband says they are hawks) that I think look like pheonixs. Finally there's a little street just across the road from Queens College that appears to have row houses in it called "Logic Lane"!! How cool! So I decided that's where Hermione will live and the row houses even seem to back onto one of those private communal gardens that seem to be everywhere in the UK (by everywhere I mean once referred to in "Notting Hill")
Thankyou again for your help! |
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great job! the story is really great so far! keep up the great work on it! its fantastic! |
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mow09Signed | Chapter : 2 | Date : 10/05/08
neat!! amazing story cooking up here..i really can't wait on what will happen next and i really want to find out who the killer is..and why brunnette muggle born girls??hmm...anyway...keep up the wonderful job and hope that you post a new chapter soon!
a fan,
mow00 |
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mow09Signed | Chapter : 1 | Date : 10/05/08
exciting!! i can feel the heat and suspense in my body!! i really want to know what will happen next! honestly your stories have gotten me very intrigued and addicted to you fanfics..hmm...i just wish you wouldn't abandon such a great plot...and story..hope to see more updates!
a fan,
mow09 |
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