Okay, I hope that you plan to continue this story. It has potential - the plot is certainly intriguing.  |
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Are we ever going to get to read that conversation between Hayley and Hermione? ... not to mention Harry's reaction while he's listening to/watching that conversation take place? |
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hello... just curious. has this fic been abandoned? or is there more to come? |
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its a nice story by the wayy... how hermione unravels his feeling to harry i cant wait... also, how will each others life will affect one another, plus the case thing of harry..
cant wait to read the next chapter.. |
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mjUnsigned | Chapter : 3 | Date : 22/05/08
this story is great and i do want to see the end of it. i would probably love for them to fight this psycho together, it would be just like old times. i\'m also proud to be delusional even though i think jk and all the ron/hermione shippers are the ones that are barmy. plis finish this story. i loved it from the start. |
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lol, poor Hermione, I just really hope she doesn't push Harry away on accident. |
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AnonymousUnsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 14/05/08
Doubt you would here the word Semester or any of the other mester's you people across the pond seem so stuck with. we keep it simple we have Term's. you really should try to write with out the Americanisms, most of the world is not American. |
Author Feedback: Firstly I'm not American, I'm Australian and still part of the empire, see point two.
Secondly I find it a bit rich when the Brittish complain about other people being culturally imperialistic when they invented the notion back in the 1800's
Thirdly a Semester is two terms and Oxford does have them, I checked.
Fourthly how bout you get your facts right before you start leaving narky reviews.
Fifthly If your going to attack and criticise someone for something so petty in future at least have the balls to leave your name so I can respond.
Finally If someone such as yourself, who obviously only reads stories to find a flaw and insult the author, can't find anything worse to say than that I shall take it with a pinch of salt and consider myself flattered. |
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jas360Signed | Chapter : 3 | Date : 13/05/08
Hmmm, i cant pass to much judgement yet, it has certainly piqued my interest, i am intrigued as to how this pans out! |
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ErasigmaUnsigned | Chapter : 3 | Date : 13/05/08
Delicious tale! I especially enjoyed how you crafted Harry and Hermione's personalities into mature and well-adjusted people who have moved on with life while still cherishing friendships made in the canon. Hurray H/Hr!Please update soon. |
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Oh yes you do, girl! You tell your good friend Hayley to stay the hell away from your man... and let the chips fall where they may. His lust... I mean, love for you will show itself eventually.  |
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Very good. love the friends. Hermione realised fairly quickly that she was in love with harry.anyways you still need a beta if u do contact me if not well s'ok. update soon! |
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Woah!! Don't forget that you are writing a PG13 rated story!!
Good chapter though. |
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BB RuthSigned | Chapter : 3 | Date : 13/05/08
 Loved the jog and how funny you described it. I was surprised by how you've written Hermione's realization about how great a guy Harry is and how she started seeing him as a 'guy' as opposed to just Harry. To me it's fresh because I always assumed that she knew Harry was fanciable. I do think your take on it was believable and could definitely see her reluctant to explore it particularly after her aborted relationship with Ron.
I'm not sure if you intend to eventually but it would be a shame if Harry's presence and worry were all for naught. You have to have him save her from death/danger
Thanks for sharing this story - can't wait for what other funny/awkward situations she finds herself in now knowing her feelings for him and what he does when he finds out! Keep up the good work! |
Author Feedback: Don't worry Harry the white Knight and Saviour will definitely be getting some airtime. As the saying goes "Fasten your seatbelts it's going to be a bumpy ride!" |
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mow09Signed | Chapter : 3 | Date : 13/05/08
that was really fun...  alas! hermione realizes how she truly feels and alas harry gets a hint! i can't wait for people to see how they are inlove! i can't wait! especially with suspense of a psycho killer around the more they will have to be together!! love your story!!
keep it up! |
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great job! this story is really good so far and i cant wait to read the rest of it! keep up the excellent work on it! |
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