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awww... that was so cute! i loved it. it shows how much harry and ron care for her even though they're guys. and it shows how girls need their "girl time"
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That was a sweet little story. I think you did a great job with the attraction and seperation of Harry and Hermione. I hope that everything works. Great job. Keep Writting!!!!!!  |
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ha ha aww.... that was cute. I can't wait to read more as usual!
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ha ha aww.... that was cute. I can't wait to read more as usual!
*%* Susanna *%* |
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Aww, now its sad again but Harry and Ron are acting like real friends again so thats good at least. |
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Aww okay now this is a little better, since she's getting the girl friends, that i always thought that Harmione needed more of.... maybe she would have ended up with Harry if she had.... ha ha |
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aww now this is sad....  I hope it gets better than this because this is just downright depressing.... but I'm sure it will though, since it is still well written |
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aww!!! so cute! i was a little worried at first on why the boys were ignoring hermione, since i'd always imagine her to confront the guys for ignoring her, but it was pulled off quite well! |
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usha88Signed | Chapter : 4 | Date : 01/05/08
Well I was definitely right about Harry and Ron talking about Hermione and such. That was a great job. I really enjoyed this little fic. Lovely! |
Author Feedback: Thanks for the review. However, they were talking more about Ron wanting to ask Luna out  Or at least this is what I thought when writing them whispering to each other and such. |
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usha88Signed | Chapter : 3 | Date : 01/05/08
Well that's completely sad. That poor girl going into there. Lovely job though. I really thought that was interesting.  |
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usha88Signed | Chapter : 2 | Date : 01/05/08
Hm...I have an inkling that the boys are spending time on figuring out how Harry needs to get to Hermione. Oh those boys are crazy. Great job. I really enjoyed this chapter. I can see Hermione becoming girly at the age of 16... |
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usha88Signed | Chapter : 1 | Date : 01/05/08
Well this seems quite interesting. I am hooked. I should be studying for my final exam, but who cares, there's plenty of time to do that. Hm...I am definitely horrible and procrastinating. Lovely job. |
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AshlieUnsigned | Chapter : 4 | Date : 30/04/08
awwww... such a sweet end to such a cute fic...
i loved it... 
its the sweetest thing ever!!
good job
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Harry's Cute There At The End. Love What Harry And Ron Did, Especially To Malfoy. Ramble On :Luv: Dysfunctionalspirit |
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what a horrible story.
i usually like your stuff but this was just something else.
the plot was horrible, your use of characterisation by no means incredible.. and just generally as a story it was too disjointed.
sorry didn't do anything for me. |
Author Feedback: No problem. You might want to read the challenge though, because the plot is mostly based on it... |
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