Well this was very cute. Great job at the first chapter. I really liked how you described how Harry felt about her.

That was a wonderful follow-up chapter - yes, my teeth are in pain from the sweetness of it all and my face from the explicit scenes! What else is there to say except for that I am a really big fan of your work and look forward to reading whatever plot-bunnies you will come up with.

Beautiful story, congratulations! The emotions were amazingly written, and the smut... simply hot. Keep it with the good job

Ohh what a lovely spin to the Deathly Hollows cabin stuff. I so wanted something like this to happen while they were alone in the middle of nowhere.
It was really nice the way you described Harry's feelings and thoughts and the way he compared Hermione with Ginny. Honestly, Ginny it's such a flat character and Hermione is so much better for him.
Keep writing like that

I love all of your stories so much. I hope you post the second half soon! =)

Update update!!! Oh for the love of humanity please update soon!

You totally should update soon pretty please with a cherry on top!

You definitely need to hurry with the next chapter. Lovely job at this. I liked the way you set this up. It was really great. Lovely job.

What a wonderful, awesome, amazing start! (Was there enough adjectives in that?? ) I especially enjoyed the reflection Harry had at the end! This chapter was way too cute!! I cannot wait to see what happens when the smut ensues! Harmony forever!! Hope you will update soon!!

Damn it all to hell.
Fantastic, once more. Update it soon.

great! i love where you are going with this idea! please keep it up!

hmmmmmI like it... go on... keep writing! I love ur fics...!! Andi like very much ur descriptions...

AAAGGHHH! The torture... Better come up with the next chapter, ASAP, or else I'll umm.. sic my grandma's newspaper collection on you! (She got a whole room of 'em! MWAHAHAHA!!) And yeah, awesome story, which is to be expected of my favorite H/Hr author.

can't wait to read the next installment... keep up the great work!!! update soon! (and definintely can not wait for the next chapter of 'the truth about love.') awesome job! -aj-

I loved it. It was so sweet and sincere. You captured the moment well with their thoughts, feelings, actions and reactions. This is definitely one of my favorite "what should have happened in canon" scenes. I can't wait for the next(smut) part! Thanks for posting and keep up the fantastic work!