oh I love your writing this chapter was so perfect, I can so see this happening. Every thought that awakens in him is 1000 times more real than any of the interactions of the canon ships!

I loved how uncomfortable he was in bed with her.

Great job as always

oh, so adorable! jsut that last line!
thank you for yet another pefect piece of fanfiction!

Good start. I am moving on to the next part. I want to see the unwinding of all this. You could use a beta though... just a suggestion.

Cheers!

Rosali

Oh-my-God!
This story made my day!
It was just one of those things that you DIDN'T expect AT ALL!

No offense to Portkey and all, but...it just not the kind of fic that you see every day.

award for you, Blingblot (again)

So, the next time I have a bad day at work, do you think I could talk you into posting something just like this??

I loved it. You certainly have more range than a teaspoon. You have *tons* of emotional range. Er, what's bigger than a ton? Kilos?

Oh my god, that was hot. Very, very, very hot.

That was absolutely lovely! Seriously, it was a great story. Just the right amount of fluff and smut. Bravo!

Of course he loves Hermione...

Is this the end?

I loved this two-shot. Congratulations for this amazing story.

Until next time,

sakura_txell

Really nice and sweet, and the smut was hot as your usual. Great job, really.

That was great. Lovely job. I really enjoyed that. It was definitely how it should've been in the seventh book!

Well this was very cute. Great job at the first chapter. I really liked how you described how Harry felt about her.

That was a wonderful follow-up chapter - yes, my teeth are in pain from the sweetness of it all and my face from the explicit scenes! What else is there to say except for that I am a really big fan of your work and look forward to reading whatever plot-bunnies you will come up with.

Beautiful story, congratulations! The emotions were amazingly written, and the smut... simply hot. Keep it with the good job

Ohh what a lovely spin to the Deathly Hollows cabin stuff. I so wanted something like this to happen while they were alone in the middle of nowhere.
It was really nice the way you described Harry's feelings and thoughts and the way he compared Hermione with Ginny. Honestly, Ginny it's such a flat character and Hermione is so much better for him.
Keep writing like that

I love all of your stories so much. I hope you post the second half soon! =)