An absolutely perfect love scene. A perfect mix of love and passion that is worthy of being the scene of the first time Harry and Hermione make love. Great job!

ahh this story made me a happy woman!i really liked it..any smut on a hhr novel is alwiz welcomed!keep it up..good description.. wink wink*

Perfect chapter. Very detailed and elaborate reasoning on why Harry and Hermione are fit for each other. You detailed Hermione's characteristic perfectly while showing Harry's reaction towards them spot on as well. Great job!

One of the things I admire about you writing (and I know I'm not the first to mention this) is how well you can write smut, but also embue it with feeling and love and all that fluffy sort of stuff. You deftly combine lust and love without skimping on either. Well-done!

As always, it's a pleasure to read something of yours; thanks for sharing

I'd like to leave a review but I am
DEAD
on the floor.

AAArrrgh I LOVED that! *rolls around flailing*

I started copying phrases that I loved to paste into my review but then I realised I'd be copying the whole thing so let me just say that was beautiful and poignant and hot and so right and just...

I you! Keep writing! Your HHr is one of the best for me x

oh I love your writing this chapter was so perfect, I can so see this happening. Every thought that awakens in him is 1000 times more real than any of the interactions of the canon ships!

I loved how uncomfortable he was in bed with her.

Great job as always

oh, so adorable! jsut that last line!
thank you for yet another pefect piece of fanfiction!

Good start. I am moving on to the next part. I want to see the unwinding of all this. You could use a beta though... just a suggestion.

Cheers!

Rosali

Oh-my-God!
This story made my day!
It was just one of those things that you DIDN'T expect AT ALL!

No offense to Portkey and all, but...it just not the kind of fic that you see every day.

award for you, Blingblot (again)

So, the next time I have a bad day at work, do you think I could talk you into posting something just like this??

I loved it. You certainly have more range than a teaspoon. You have *tons* of emotional range. Er, what's bigger than a ton? Kilos?

Oh my god, that was hot. Very, very, very hot.

That was absolutely lovely! Seriously, it was a great story. Just the right amount of fluff and smut. Bravo!

Of course he loves Hermione...

Is this the end?

I loved this two-shot. Congratulations for this amazing story.

Until next time,

sakura_txell

Really nice and sweet, and the smut was hot as your usual. Great job, really.

That was great. Lovely job. I really enjoyed that. It was definitely how it should've been in the seventh book!