Very fluffy, very smutty, and *very* long--I loved it! The last line, "Well, of course," was perfect. I liked that it moved so fast, but it was entirely based on their long friendship and they just hadn't recognized what they really felt for each other yet. I also enjoyed Hermione pondering the same issue earlier, and concluding that if she had to choose between Ron and Harry,"It was Harry, had always been, would always be Harry." A very nice summation of their entire relationship in a way.

One thing that never fails to shine in your stories is the amazingly descriptive details you give. You can see it, taste it, enjoy it. Another wonderful piece.

Please write more. I\\\'m loving this story and the fact that they\'ve stopped letting everything and everyone distract them from each other

Please continue with this fic.It's really good.
I wan't to see how this story goes on.

beautiful! really beautiful! most especially the line:
--and how had he never noticed that the word ‘you’ when it was spoken looked like a kiss?

Beautifully written story, as usual Always one of my favorite PK authors. Can't wait for the next one

Beyond indescribable. That was brilliant! I loved every single bit of it. What pleased me the most is how they both really pondered on their feelings for each other (which, by the way, was very well written!).

Great job!

I absolutely loved this chapter/story!!! I love reading all your stories because your always write the best stories!!! Please update soon!!!!!

another great story from you. I love it. You have H/Hr's love story down so wonderfully. can't wait to see another story from you.

This was great! I love it, had the right amount of fluff and smut.

An absolutely perfect love scene. A perfect mix of love and passion that is worthy of being the scene of the first time Harry and Hermione make love. Great job!

ahh this story made me a happy woman!i really liked it..any smut on a hhr novel is alwiz welcomed!keep it up..good description.. wink wink*

Perfect chapter. Very detailed and elaborate reasoning on why Harry and Hermione are fit for each other. You detailed Hermione's characteristic perfectly while showing Harry's reaction towards them spot on as well. Great job!

One of the things I admire about you writing (and I know I'm not the first to mention this) is how well you can write smut, but also embue it with feeling and love and all that fluffy sort of stuff. You deftly combine lust and love without skimping on either. Well-done!

As always, it's a pleasure to read something of yours; thanks for sharing

I'd like to leave a review but I am
DEAD
on the floor.

AAArrrgh I LOVED that! *rolls around flailing*

I started copying phrases that I loved to paste into my review but then I realised I'd be copying the whole thing so let me just say that was beautiful and poignant and hot and so right and just...

I you! Keep writing! Your HHr is one of the best for me x