The way you wound down to that one-liner is quite fantastic!

the last line was hilarious and the story was sexy..i love d/g as a couple,married or not and i love the situation you put them in..good work..

LMAO! I really had NOT expected it to be something like that, not remembering to put down the toilet seat, for them to have such an argument over!
... what\'d she do, fall in?

Haha, thats great! Funny too. Such a simple thing to argue about but sometimes it does make the best stories. Great job with this story.

Oh good lordy. The ending line completely cracked me up. It is so true of married life! Loved it and thanks for sharing this fun fic.

Haha awesome!!! I toally cracked up laughing at the end!!! I just love stupid arguments (it\'s what makes them human...=])

QUITE A STEAMY STORY YOU GOT HERE!!!!!
GREAT JOB!
ALWAYS FUN TO HAVE A GOOD ROMP IN THE BATHROOM

I just wanted to say that I just loved the ending.

hahaha. i loved it. this is what a story should have in it lol. no chance of you writing a long story??? like at least 15 chapters?? i think it would turn out really well. off to your other stories now. keep the writing up!!

lmfao!
Wow the end is just amazing
the story overall was great but the ending just made my laugh so insanely loud, my brother was asking if I need to talk about things.. lmao.
Great story. =]

"But please, try to remember to put down the seat when you're finished from now on"

i could not stop laughing at that point.

really hot story though. great job

Smut makes for good writing.

Excellent story... I enjoyed reading it.