papertrailUnsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 05/03/10
he finally wisened up!  very well written story. I loved their banter. |
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I like the style of writing in Hermione's journal and I totally love the ending . |
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I really loved their banter in this. I mean, perfect Hermione characterization and I really enjoy playful Harry and you made me want to punch Ginny in the face. I hate when women tear each other down, but you just know that Ginny has done it to Hermione too many times. I like Ginny enough, but she just is the type and after HBP, I know it.
And, can I just say that I LOVE their little interaction at the end? The slap was priceless. Venus and Mars definitely.
Good show!  |
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Cofre_713Signed | Chapter : 1 | Date : 06/04/09
LOVED the slap!
Just...just... adored it!!! 
Oh! And the story too.  |
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Cofre_713Signed | Chapter : 1 | Date : 06/04/09
LOVED the slap!
Just...just... adored it!!!
Oh! And the story too. |
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yum3samaSigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 20/10/08
I love the way you write, how its dramatic but not overly so, its more like subtle dramatics...if that makes any sense =p |
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It was great, I love how you write the Harry and Hermione relationship.. their dynamics are awesome... ^^ |
Author Feedback: thank you so much! |
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CateagleSigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 27/06/08
*laughs* It's taking him a while, but it appears that she's finally getting through to him as to how she feels and he's coming to realize that she's so much better for him than those bints out there who just see the hero and not the man behind the image. I daresay that after her demonstration of how "it's supposed to be" that he's truly going to "see the light". |
Author Feedback: lol, i just didnt want it all to be perfect in the end. more often than not you find that despite all the odds the couple ends up together and shares and amazing kiss (something that i often do in my fics as well lol) but for this one i thoguht that their entire path there was so bumpy and rtaher unorthodo that they deserved a faulty first kiss to live up to past precedents set |
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LOL Love it!
Hermione sounds so smart.
All those references made my head spin abit, but it just makes Hermione much more in character.
And Harry is such a rogue in here. Love that too!
There are a few minor spelling mistakes, but nothing that can't be fixed with an an edition. |
Author Feedback: aw, sorry for sending your head for a spin there, but glad to hear that it at least sounded in character, that's always good lol
thank you so much for reviewing! |
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LOL! Nice ending~! Very nice and light. Wasn't exactly expecting it to end like that, but hey, it's best not to figure it out ahead of time, right? Anywho, great story! |
Author Feedback: lol, glad to hjear that you liked it, and a little surprise cant be all that bad lol |
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AnonymousUnsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 26/04/08
haha that was really cute and very fuuny..nice job keep writing |
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skyaceSigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 23/04/08
Lol. I loved it. Hermione had spunk / character. It's wierd but Hermione actually comes across as very mature / intelligent. Maybe I'm just tired but I don't usually notice that in fanfics. Hmm.. Now I'm just rambling. Doh. |
Author Feedback: thank you so much, that's very kind of you to say 
as for her coming off as mature, glad to hear it, i was a bit afraid of the fact that the fact that she's pining over a guy and writing in a diary may hold an immaturity factor that'd overshadow the person who she's supposed to come off as
thank you! |
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This was such a sweet story...I totally relate to Hermione. Always the best friend and never the love interest. Hopefully my Harry figures it out soon. Great writing though =) |
Author Feedback: lol, glad to hear it, thank you for reviewing! |
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Nice one-shot, very funny the kiss at the end, that it wasn't perfect but rather bad hehe... and Ginny being obnoxious isn't that far from canon... I liked it a lot! |
Author Feedback: well i got bored of it always being the perfect sweet kiss
in reality, sometimes it's just not liek that, sometimes the guy is a horny ldude who really does have a onetrack mind (in fact, it's like that on most occasions lol) so i figured why not do an homage to that lol |
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This was a good story, i really liked the end and the banter between them was funny.  |
Author Feedback: glad to hear it |
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