this was such a cool and sweet little fanfic. it made me laugh my head off at times. i love your fics, write more!!  |
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piper_09Signed | Chapter : 1 | Date : 25/04/08
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Author Feedback: lol, glad to hear you like it
as for darcy and eleizabeth, sorry thot that was an obvious one, it's pride & prejudice by jane austen (only novel by her that i can actually stand lol) |
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Good story, different to the usual but there are quite a few typos that could do with tweaking, wrong tenses/words etc, got those sorted and it\'ll be brill. |
Author Feedback: lol, yeah posteda beta requeest in the forums here so we'll see what comes of that
but glad to hear that you liked it nonetheless |
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AnonymousUnsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 21/04/08
Very nice! It was very cute how you had James just kiss her without warning and then the whole frustrating/funny conversation that followed. Good job; and with the exception of a few typos and verb tense issues, the story read very smoothly as well. It was a great first story to read in response to my challenge--Keep up the good writing.~jenkent |
Author Feedback: yeah, i put up a request for a beta so we'll see how that oen pansout, but i'm glad to hear that you enjoyed it nonetheless, thank you for reviewing! |
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Harry85Signed | Chapter : 1 | Date : 20/04/08
Really nice, I truly loved it. Typical James, but not so typical Lily if you consider she was amtes with him here and supposedly she hated him before they got together in canon...  |
Author Feedback: lol, yeah, but a bit of AU here and there is always a fun thing to toy with 
glad to hear you enjoyed it though! |
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I love pride and prejudice! I liked the way you combined Darcy and James.  |
Author Feedback: aw thank you, glad to hear it! |
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anyways i really reallay like it but i am a bit confued who the heck are Darcy and Elizabeth????? other than that i like it ! oh and HI!!!!!!!!!!!!!! 
KEEP WRITING!i can tell you've been busy!