I. Adore. This.

Beautiful and very plausible about how they drifted apart. Brilliant.

i like that. it's cute. very nice and uplifting. really enjoyed that.

Wow, what a great little story this is. So sorry that I have not had time to review the rest of the chapters of Rose-Colored Glasses but I just had to review this little story. I just love your versions of Hermione.

"Wite beyond measure is man's greatest treasure"

This quote so fits all of your stories and writing style. The wit and repartee between Harry and Hermione are so well written. You can't help but smile when they have a real conversation with each other. I have luckily added you to my favorite author's list so I get updates whenever you post a story. Great little story once again. Can't for more stories from you..

That was a great fic. I really enjoyed it. I liked how you showed the back story and said how time ended up ruining their relationship. Great job....lovely job.

I liked the ending, it was very cute.

oooo liked this story too. kinda sad how they lost touch there though. But i guess that is what life does to people. at least they found eachother again. love your writing by the way. keep it up.

Oh lovely story! I liked it how they were already total strangers and then became friends again!
Nice one-shot! It was entertaining.

That was really cute. I enjoyed the way that you healed the rift between them... the dancing was great.

Very cute. I loved this. What a wonderful little story for us all to devour and enjoy! Thanks so much!

that was brtilliant i love the fact that hermione loves to wach his but LOL totally ROFL, and the hole inter acativity with the 2 of them it was so them for what matter thise fic makes it all alright 4 me rright now !!!!

That was fun. I especially appreciated how I didn't have to read about Harry agonizing and worrying about Hermione wanting the same thing and yada yada yada. There's a limit to how much of that I want to read. I enjoy this "novel" approach where Harry just kisses her.



In terms of editing, you have a few minor infractions: you wrote 'know' instead of 'knock' and you used 'affect' - which means to pretend to have or to feel - instead of 'effect'. If there was another one or two, they weren't big enough for me to remember.



Anyway, thank you for sharing this with us. Keep up the good work.

Really nice one. Good job, I truly enjoyed it! Although, why they drifted apart I don't know.

For someone who just skim-read the books, that was a pretty good effort. You seemed to have captured the dynamic of Harry and Hermione.

aw. this was absolutly lovely. i liked it and enjoyed every part of it, especially the one month later, one week, and so on.
in my head though, i had this idea that you'd write one minute later."he kissed her". lol. but i'm not saying you should've. it was a thought.
lovely! and favorites. XD

Hey hun!!!!!!! Os once Again Once Again this brilliant girl manages to render me speechless once again!

You really have to stop that...ok don't or else....I'll I'll I'll remove uh..uh ootp h/hr or your fave harmony scenes YAH!!! that's good so once again you show the realness soooooo well!!!! It makes it genuine heartfelt and nearly renders me to tears it is so beautiful! Seriously GORGEOUS!!! OMG! the love declaration was done so beautifully and I agree with your description of Harry 101% LOL I mean that boy made me think glasses are COOL! LOL! Now if someone could convince me about braces but seriously the realness and the pure raw emotion BEAUTIFUL!!

The way you captured the characters was lovely and brought real genuinness in their actions showing flaws and insecurities making it a even more fab story!!

xoxo
Hana