I see there is another chapter, which I will be off to read shortly, but I wanted to say that there was something perfectly bittersweet about this chapter and how it portrayed the passage of time. Not only do things come full circle from the birth of their child to the birth of their grandchild, but you also somehow captured the high points of their family life without succumbing to cliche. Wonderful piece of work, even though as you said quite fluffy. Well done, and thanks.

awe this story was so cute! i cant wait to read the rest of the stories that you come up with!keep up the excellent work on them!

second chapter seems to be a mistake... why would you ruin it? so what you screwed up in the first shot, but snippets and changes of life together are stupid rewritten

OK...this one was good too. David and Harriet were a little ahead of Teddy and Em!!

Still Harry and Hermione AND Ron and Luna....grandparents....how cute. Of course Remus and Tonks....what a pair!!

Well, That is how it should have been all along!! I Love that Remus and Tonks are still alive.......such a mean thing for JKR to have done. I can't forgive her for that....or Hedwig....or Fred. What was she thinking??? (NOT)

Harry and Hermione as grandparents....so cute!!

Nice Story

Ah, the fluff…I am not very much into fluff, but this is very sweet (and I really needed it after…nevermind). I`ve read the first version on LJ and I think you did a pretty good job with the changes. I liked to see a little more of David- and, I don`t know, maybe it`s just an impression but this 2nd version seemed a little less *sugary*…I don`t know.

Anyways, it is lovely!


(PS: You should write more!

Definitely enjoyed the story tho so much fluff... I mean good lord.

Also how is dear madscientist since I did notice you borrowed the character names... tho since you beta they might have been your names originally anyway lol. Teddy of course was from JKR land instead of Xander but yea.

I got no probs with it at all tho... her work wouldn't be as good without you beta'ing it. Still good but not the epicness that it is.

I must now visit my dentist for all the cavities I've gotten from reading this. I loved all of it! All of the scenes were awesome and sweet. Thanks for posting.

Aww such a cute story.But what about thier son David you could another chapter but about him this time.good story

Nice, very nice. The cyclic nature is nice. Good to see something from you, its always a treat.

What a lovely story. I love the name Emilia. Very pretty.

nice little bit of fluff you got here!i;ve read some of your other stories and they;re all very good,but i hope you get back to fixing yesterdays mistakes,that story has a lot of potentiel! keep up the good work,hannibalking5!

Aww, that was cute. The years progression was really nice as well. Thanks for posting this.

Just a high-points look at things, but quite the enjoyable read as we see the development and evolution of their love and care for each, and then how it manifests itself in their children and how they grew. A gentle and soft one-shot that says a lot in a compact form.

Bravo!!

What happened to David? You mention him at the graveyard and then breifly on the platform and then completely ignore his presence in the rest of the scenes you right about. If the story is about harry and hermione being happy and their life don\'t you think you should include the son they had as well as the daughter?